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  1. Surveillance
    I liked. Clean, concise, easy to follow. A bit jumpy at times and over-telling, but it was a damn fine job for a first chapter. I'll be watching for the next.
  2. Surveillance
    Name: HaloGeek Weapon(s): Hammer and Sickle Appearance: Red Robes, yellow hammer and sickle crossed on his back. Skills and Powers: Extreme physical fitness and speed. Highest charisma of any living being(aka, can bring anyone to work together). Speaks English, Latin, and Russian. Bio: Not much is known about him, only that he comes from a strange place, where everyone is equal. He is believed to be the Living Manifestation of Communism.
  3. Surveillance
    Those who rebel will be silenced by the will of the people. The Workers' Paradise is without state, without disturbance, without oppression. One man with a gun can control 100 without one.
  4. Surveillance
    I haven't been following along. Did I die?
  5. Surveillance
    Damn fine job, Onsokumaru.
  6. Surveillance
    Wonderful start to a great story! Can't wait what happens next!
  7. Surveillance
    While I am more sympathetic to the casualties on the Eastern Front, I will say this: Britain, US, and Canada. You had to have sent some of the bravest soldiers in warfare history. Just imagine, running out onto a beach with machine guns flying and watching your friend die all around you. Western Allies, I cannot thank you enough for your service to help topple Nazi Germany and the Axis. Thank you for providing my country with the lend lease supplies and equipment we needed to kick Germany's *** in 1943 at Stalingrad, turning the tide of the Eastern Front. Well done Britain, for holding off against the ever so more trained and equipped Luftwaffe with your brave RAF. Brilliant job US, for coming back to be one of the most powerful nations in the world. You may have gotten your *** kicked in North Africa in the beginning, but you didn't give up. Good work Canada, for serving the Crown and helping defeat Nazi Germany. Russia and all the former Soviet States are in debt to you. Thank you.
  8. Surveillance
    ME! ME! I'll definitely go! GT: Purpl3 Krayon
  9. Surveillance
    Name: HaloGeek/Gavril Kolontayev Location: Moscow, Russia. (SOON TO BE ALASKA :3) Age: 13 Bio: I'm a male living in Russia with Muscovite Heritage. I was born into a family that had an active history in the Soviet Union, Stasi, and in the Communist Party. I'm not really proud of those things but I didn't choose my family. Because of the problems in Russia currently, me and my family are moving to the Eastern Aleutians(mainland Alaska). I did have a brother. Religion: Reform Judaism Likes: Hanging out, making languages, writing, piano, violin Dislikes: Snakes, Jerks, Spiders, Customary System How to describe me: Stone wall. Future Career: 1) Physicist, 2) Paleolinguistics, 3) Synthetic Biology
  10. Surveillance
    I'll be in it as a Snowman Hermit who lives in Icy Mountains in isolation
  11. Surveillance
    Sorry I haven't been posting. Been doing some stuff. Should have Part 2 up soon. And Delpen, this is in no way related to Halo...
  12. Surveillance
    Because you mixed Cyrillic and Latin and butchered Cyrillic Characters, even though I am a native Russian speaker the only thing I could understand was the actual Russian.
  13. Surveillance
    Вход Директора 001 Июнь 1963 Марс колонии «Новая Земля» День 3 Мы успешно создали импровизированную базy на поверхности Марса. Translating from <RU.LANG> to <EN.LANG> Director’s Log 001 June 1963 Mars Colony ‘The New Land’ Day 3 We successfully established a makeshift base on the surface of Mars. We weren’t entirely sure what to expect, and we still aren’t. Aliens? An American colony? No. The Americans cannot even get a rocket off the ground, so why should I think they could get here. President Khrushchev was at first skeptical about skipping the moon and going straight to Mars. The Soviet Space Program told him that there was much more to be studied and harvested on Mars, including all the iron. I was skeptical too, because Siberia already had tonnes and tonnes of iron already, but the SSP assured him it was the right thing to do. There isn’t much to do. SSP said that a second unmanned rocket with all the supplies we needed to start up the colony would arrive in a few days. They also said if there is even the slightest bit of miscalculation or interference on the way to Mars, the rocket wouldn’t arrive and we would die out here. Way to encourage us. Dmitri says that a day on Mars lasts roughly as long as a day on Earth, so the day/night cycles would be the about the same as Earth. Maybe this will help us sleep. I hope to God that rocket arrives.
  14. Surveillance
    Self expression fades away with the right provocation. Sorry JL, wish you luck.
  15. Surveillance
    It isn't nice to make your writing a weapon. It is a good story, I'll give you that. But if you really care about the story, then you should write regardless of feedback. It isn't fair to people who really like your story but just don't have anything to say(Like me). Just keep writing. Keep sharing it.
  16. Surveillance
    I'll try to attend.
  17. Surveillance
    Well.... this is awkward.
  18. Surveillance
    HaloDoge.
  19. Surveillance
    being shot at by idiots...
  20. Surveillance
    I'd like to make an appearance somehow. Maybe an Ambassador from another nation state, I don't know.
  21. Surveillance
    What happened to Dumby isn't even humanly possible but I like it!
  22. Surveillance
    That was wonderful! I hope there will be a use for Architect's jet pack though.
  23. Surveillance
    Yay I'm second highest!
  24. Surveillance
    To be honest, I don't care about anything in the game except for the music. Like Elite said, change it! 343i Composers, please. Just make the predictability of the music based on the emotional output of the circumstance a lot less! I have played so much Halo that I can predict the song that is going to go with what you are doing in the game. That's all I ask.
  25. Surveillance
    1.) Air Assault 2.) DMR 3.) Combat Knife, Magnum 4.) MJOLNIR Air Assault Variant: Dark Blue Visor, Gray armour all around the body except for the red joints(knees, elbows, wrists) 5.) Jet Pack 6.) Plasma Grenade 7.) Architect Personality: A cold hearted b.astard that tries to do everything he needs to do within the exact time and constraints with the most amount of efficiency possible. You can see how he would act.
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