D-38 Boss

If you haven't already, It would help me TREMENDOUSLY if you'd give my FF a read, NOT A SKIM, a read. so far, I only think two people are reading it, (THANK HALOGEEK AND SPARKFLOW!) and I need more feedback. so please read it, and be as brutally honest as you'd like about it. I'm not posting it to get positive reviews, although I'd love to get them, I'm posting it to improve as a writer. Read here: http://www.343industries.org/forum/topic/28622-ground-zero-halo-3-...