Xtounge, you're lucky that Choot 'Em was nice enough to embed your images for you. I suggest doing this yourself for any of your future map posts.
Anyway, I see some issues with the map from looking at the screenshots.
- Oversteep ramp: In the 2nd picture, that ramp is too steep. I suggest that you don't use those 2x2 steeps as an incline in a competitive map. A lot of people resort to using them as walls or flooring. But not as an actual ramp. Personally, I use the Ramp XL, Stunt, and 2x2 for my ramp ups.
- Low roof: In the 3rd screenshot, that ceiling is too low. You never want players hitting their heads when they jump.
- Lazy/sloppy forging: As seen in the 4th and 5th screenshots, you left a bunch of holes/openings uncovered. This is quite sloppy and I suggest covering these up.
That's all I got from looking at the pictures but if I get the chance to download the map, I'll let you know what else I find.