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  1. Hello! I am kind of new here, since I've been here for 15 days, and I was wondering what warning points were. I don't have any but I just wanted to know how to avoid them. Thanks!
  2. Chapter 4 of my fanfiction, "Tale of Breeze" is up! Read it (if you want). :D

  3. 4. Creeping down a dark hall, heart -thumping, on a cold night was terrifying. Especially since he didn't know what was lurking in the shadows. The slightest bump or gust of wind was like a storm of fear, destroying River's insides. As he continued to walk, he noticed a common trend. The doors had numbers posted on them; room numbers. 202, 203, 204, 205....he counted. They seemed to never end. Finally, at room 215, the hall turned sharply, revealing another long passageway. Where's an elevator when you need one, River thought. After a long journey, running past countless rooms, he finally reached a door, with a sign that read "To roof." River pushed open the door, a screeching creak echoing off of it. He ran up the first flight of stairs, found that the door to the 3rd story was locked, and continued to ascend. During the run, he found that the building had 9 stories. River kicked the door leading to the roof open. He sprinted to the edge, looking down into the dark abyss below. He suddenly envied the birds, soaring gracefully in the sky. No fear of ever falling down. River spotted a ledge, about two stories below him. It might get me killed, but it's worth a shot, he thought. River crouched down, surveying the area. If he jumped too far, he'd miss the ledge and plummet down to his death. He needed footholes. He turned around, scanning for something to carve out the holes with. He then spotted a piece of metal, lodged into the ground. Pulling with all of his might, the metal came loose, sending him tumbling head-over-heels until he fell over the edge. Panic shot through River in the few seconds that had passed. His hand had found a crook in the wall. He hang on desperately, trying to think of what to do next. He then decided to lodge the piece of metal into the wall, making another hand hold. He kicked the wall, using all of his strength, creating a hole slightly smaller than his foot could rest on. He decided to try anyway. His foot barely hanging on, he dislodged the piece of metal, and struck another area of the wall with it, a foot below him. He dropped down a couple of inches, letting his hand rest on the hole he created with his foot. He then kicked two footholes, letting his feet rest in them. He had made it down one story. One more to go, River thought. Just as he was beginning to descend, the piece of metal gave way, slipping out of River's hand, eliminating his only hand hold. His heart began to beat faster and faster, as he plummeted down. He tried desperately to find a crack in the wall, but was not successful. The ledge came into view. He reached for it, but his fingers brushed past it. This is it, he thought. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- His eyes flung open. River attempted to sit up, but he found that his back was sore. How am I still alive? Surely, a drop like that would have killed me, he thought. His question was answered, as he glanced around him, finding that he was resting on a balcony. He must have not seen it, when he looked down before he started to climb. If inanimate objects could hear, he'd definitely thank the balcony. He then thought of the years in the past when his mother offered to take him to rock climbing classes. I should've said yes, River thought.
  4. (((Just wanted to take the time to inform you, if you are curious, that my character River is not a spartan. He's more of a self-trained fighter: a civilian, if you will.)))
  5. Wow! Quite an action packed chapter! Im lovin all the characters (especially Logan). Quote: “Ooo…. This is your brain… this is your brain on lead, any questions?” Genius dialogue.
  6. This is absolutely incredible! It takes guts to draw master chief because he is such a world renowned character! Kudos to you!
  7. lol. no its not. Urs is AMAZING. oops i spelled your wrong
  8. chapter 3 of my story, tale of breeze, is up. its not much but its the start of an amazing adventure.

    1. D-38 Boss

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      It's very well written! if a little short.

    2. Sp4rkFloW
  9. 3. Everything around him seemed to disappear. It was just him and the beast, and that is all that mattered. The creature grumbled a low, menacing growl, that was anything but reassuring. River, his hand trembling, crouched down, and began to move backwards along the wall. To his surprise, the monster stood in place, almost statue like, his eyes "seeming" to rest on River. As he approached the back wall, he glanced at the window; his only escape route. Suddenly, one thing came to his mind: Ripper. It was a peace of the past that found its way back home. He wasn't alone. He remembered constructing a make-shift blade sometime during his past.....but when? He called this blade (constructed of sharpened glass, and twigs) Ripper. He also remembered that he kept this weapon at his side at all times, if possible. This time it wasn't. Facing an enemy unarmed is something River wasn't looking forward to doing, but some say that a man's best weapon are his fists. Or his heart. But River doubted a hug and a kiss would do him any justice. He decided to play the stealth game. Since, the beast appeared to have not seen him, it was best to stay in the shadows. The ape -like creature, awakening from his "statue state" had decided that there was no threat, growled, and backed out of the room. River had never liked the darkness, but now he wanted nothing more. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
  10. Add ons are just used to give a "flashy" feel to the helmets.
  11. If you look at, "Mario the carpenter", you can see that the 1st letter of the 1st and 3rd word spell MC. Master chief. And if you take the letters, COD. You can figure out that "c" is the 3RD letter of the alphabet "o" is the 15th and 15 is two less than 17, which if you add 1 to it, you get 117. 11-7 is 4. Finally, "d" is the 4th letter, which if you take 1, like in 117,And subtract it from 4, you get 3. If you look at it all together, you get 343.
  12. The most epic moment was when halo combat evolved was released.
  13. The kick and recoil of the smg was too much for me. But even, though the smg can be dual wielded, I have to pick the assault rifle.
  14. Yea. People need to be more concerned about the future, and not the past.
  15. I LOVE the anime feel to it!
  16. This map is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!! I would love to play snipers or swat on here.
  17. Default with gold visor gets the job done
  18. I do like Noble 6, but he reminds me too much of The Rookie.
  19. Yeah. It looked fun to play with, and not to eat!
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