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  1. Beginning of novel should read chptr 1 next chapters better!!!
  2. This is the first chapter last post was a typo tell me what you all thinkk.!!! Chapter 1 It was dark in the briefing room of the unsc destroyer step by step as the captain waited for the squad to arrive. There late said lieutenant olmos. I know the captain said but its not a pretty feeling comming out of cryo sleep. The lieutenant just grunted at the captains reply. 10 minutes later the squad arrived and stood at attention. At ease said captain Aries Jameson. As the squad took there seats he started the presentation with a holographic representation of the planet and its moon. This is Planet X-3140 her moon seems to have a covenant facility of some sort so your objective will be simple accuire as much intel as possible and destroy the facility and all hostiles present. Sounds easy sir said a young staff sergant named jack Richards. Be that as it may were not takeing any chances the captain said. We seem to have been blessed with the element of suprise so As soon as we're close enough to the planet you will get to the moon via pelican and get dropped off 10 miles from the facility. You will have to leg it from there. Take what you want from the ships armory and get ready to move out by 1900. Yes sir! The squad said in incision an saluted. Dismissed barked the captain and all 8 of the odsts exited the room one by one. What do you think is down there sarge? Asked pfc Daniel. I dont know son said jack but what ever it is it has to be pretty damn important to the covies. Lucky for us that well be blowing it up said another pfc by the name of Erik. Yeah said jack. Hopefully we don't run into alot of resistance down there. They only got one frigate there. Should be a piece of cake then said corporal henry radchief. I hope your right corporal thought jack as his squad headed to the armory.
  3. Prologue She looks him in the eyes and asks ''jack why do you have to go"? "Cindy i told you im never going to get off this godforsaken planet working in the mines like my dad" i answered her question. What if something happens to you? Her dark brown eyes withheld a tear Jake held her hands and said I promise you nothings going to happen to Cindy. I'll be back to visit you by next Christmas The cold night with the full moon on the colony world revium ll the breeze feels good after a hot summer day. A Moment of silence Passes by with both of them looking into each others eyes she asks him" what if something does happen to you"? "dont worry about me Cindy just focus on takeing care of your family and stay out of trouble. Jack holds her from her waist and looks into her eyes. he leans in to give the girl of his dreams a kiss as a eyes closed they savor each other's lips never wanting the moment to end when all of a sudden something feels wrong Jack opened his eyes instead of beautiful brown eyed girl standing there stood a corpse with fourth degree burns covering her entire body. The moon turns red and the ground beneath their feet has turned the glass the air is unbearably hot Jack turns back to Cindy only to find no one.there was only glass were she stood. Cindy! Screamed Jack. Jack felt that someone was behind him and he turns around and sees a familiar figure. a covenant elite with his energy sword drawn.As the elit moves forward on his prey Jack realizes that he cant Move as the elite comes closer and closer ready to plunge the crackling twin blades of his energy into him fear and hopelessness take over jack. When all of a sudden out of no were jack hears a familiar voice calling his name The elite roared and lunged forward but before the elite could plunge his sword into jack a white light over came the nightmare and a choking sensation overwhelms jack. Jack falls to the floor and throws up the lime flavored mucus that kept his body safe durring cryo sleep. You okay buddy? asked Anthony. Yeah I just had a rough dream answered jack Well hurry up captains waiting for us in the briefing room. The last thing Jack wanted to do was go to briefing he was still thinking about the chared corpse in his nightmare when all of a sudden Anthony hands him a towel. Any idea why were out here ask Anthony no answer Jack all I know is that there's some covenant ******** down there who are unlucky to be running into us today. Damn straight said private 1st class Daniel. As staff sergant jack hollands got dressed he couldn't shake the thought of the chared corpse. It's been over 3 years since his home world was glassed by the covenant. But it still haunted him. Millions op people dead Cindy included and there was nothing he could have done to save them. So much for promises kept thought jack as he slipped on his combat boots .
  4. Hey guys... I've been a fan of halo since i saw the trailer in 2000 an i wanna write a novel. A legitimate halo novel. My ultimate goal is to get it published. But gotta start small right!?!? Well this is my idea it takes place in 2546 and the whol plot revolves around an marine staff sergeant who is yet to be named and a sanghelli zealot and his squad who was sent to investigate a forerunner instillation similar to the one in halo 2 only this ones on land and not suspended by a tether. The spec ops unit that was sent as an forward expeditionary force has gone silent prompting the use of the zealots skills. Unknown to them the flood got em but they managed to seal off most of the facility except we're covenant forces have it secured. So ONI (nothing good comes from ONI) sends the staff sergant and his squad to see what the covenant have found. Expecting to see action they are only met by the few remaining covenant soldiers. As they go deeper into the facility they run into the flood and later meet the zealot team. They make a temporary alliance to escape. They meet the monitor of that facility and it tells them about the flood. And that he is going to activate the facilities self destruct before the flood can get out. The unlikely allies try to stop him but the monitor will succeed and only 1 will make it out alive. Can you guys give me some honnest feed back on my plot?
  5. I was 6 years old wen halo 1 came out and honnestly i was scared wen i played the level 343 guilty spark. Im still fascinated by them!
  6. Spartan 2s were kidnapped because of their genetic heritage. And were all augmented surgically. The 3s were all orphans and were given the an opurtunitty for revenge and their augmentations were chemically induced which was why there were so many because there were far less fatalities. The 4s were all consenting adults. I have little knowledge on their augmentations but i do know they take alot of crap from dr. Halsey which is understandable. I dont think any future generation of Spartans will live up to the legacy of the 2s and 3s.
  7. Thel vadam is my boy!!! I would be elated to see thel in the future halo games.
  8. Spartan 2s were kidnapped because of their genetic heritege and were replaced by flash clones which are clones that deteriorate and die in a few years While the 3s were given the choice.
  9. The spartan 2s unlike the threes which were given the oppurtunitty for revenge were kidnapped by their government. I belive that the few remaining 2s should command and guide the young but experienced spartan 3s and the newer spartan 4s who had the choice to become Spartans.
  10. The campaign in halo 3 was beautiful and the story was awsome. No disrespect to the chief But I really like the idea of playing as someone other than mc. Not only that but being able to customize your Spartans gender and armor in reach was someting very new and something that i enjoyed.
  11. Do you guys think the flood will return to the games?
  12. My favorite character is Philips from the kilo 5 trilogy. He had the courage to travel to sanghelios when the majority of sanghelli still hated humanity. In the games it has to be sesa reffumee. He knew the prophets would come for him but he still spat in their faces
  13. I also read that the flood are extra galactical. The flood have fascinated me since i was a kid. I would imagine the unsc wouls tread carefully when exploring forerunner facilities.
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