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Ok so here is more on Chapter 1 Chapter 1:Prologue Oni had ordered Noble Team to destroy a Covenant installation known as the Spire. Noble 6 had eliminated all Covenant stationed to the tower. He deactivated the shield around the Spire and began to run towards the edge of installation. Noble 5 and Noble 1 arrived in a Falcon just as Noble 6 exited the Spire. 6 ran and jumped towards Noble 5 who grabbed his wrist and dragged him into the Falcon. Noble 1:"Shields are down, Sir." Fleet Comm:"UNSC Grafton, you are authorised to engage. Mac rounds have been authorized." Francis Mallarde:"Roger that, moving to engage target" The figure of the star frigate glided over to the Spire. The Mac cannon began to charge as all air personnel withdrew. The shot rang out and the Spire crumbled as Noble Team looked on. Without warning the Covenant Super Carrier, that loomed in the skies above Reach, glassed the Grafton and ripped in two. Fleet Comm:"UNSC Grafton, come in Grafton!" Noble 1:"Grafton's dust, Sir." Fleet Comm:"Roger that Noble 1, get yourselves out of there." The Grafton drifted down from its altitude of 500 feet slowly before hitting the same the spot the Spire once stood. A dust cloud rose above the crash site followed by an mushroom cloud as the engines exploded. The remaining air units scrambled. No rescue came. Everyone expected there to be no survivors. But nobody suspected that a single engineer was smarter than the average human.

Hello everyone! I decided to write my own Halo book. I will post the first chapter in this topic. I would like feedback on it also. The book is called Stranded. Its about an engineer who was on the UNSC Grafton. Chapter 1:Prologue Fleet Comm:"UNSC Grafton, you are authorized to engage. Mac rounds have been authorized." Francis Mallarde:"Roger that, moving to engage target" The figure of the star frigate glided over to the Spire, a Covenant installation. The Mac cannon began to charge as all air personnel withdrew. The shot rang out and the Spire crumbled as Noble Team looked on. Without warning the Covenant Super Carrier, that loomed in the skies above Reach, glassed the Grafton and ripped in two. Fleet Comm:"UNSC Grafton, come in Grafton!" Noble 1:"Grafton's dust, Sir." Fleet Comm:"Roger that Noble 1, get yourselves out of there." The Grafton drifted down from its altitude of 500 feet slowly before hitting the same the spot the Spire once stood. A dust cloud rose above the crash site followed by an mushroom cloud as the engines exploded. The remaining air units scrambled. No rescue came. Everyone expected there to be no survivors. But nobody suspected that a single engineer was smarter than the average human.

Miranda Keyes? She died right? And Johnson said something about dying i think.

Money and H4 As for food well a curry and a hell of a lot of ice cream

Wow your good at this. Correct! Do you win now or something? Axilus Prime - 10 Ryu♥Hayabusa - 1 Beckoningzebra1 - 1 JXZAW - 3 RC-01/271 - 1 RedStarRocket91 - 1 Elite Sniper - 1 JL - 3 Church - 3 UNSC Spartan-II - 1 prometheanpwner - 1

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Trapped in the bowels A little guy is found Although he cant move at all He shows regard for protocol

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Have you guys read my post? I lead a clan and am a Private/Tank in another

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One Final Effort used on the last mission of 3

Looks amazing! Might actually watch this myself

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Yes i agree with what you said but what about Windows XP becoming obsolete? That's a big event

I will be able to attend this playdate!!!!! Although i might miss the first game or two. GT: GrayWarrior68

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Parkour. I will say no more.

Could people please stop making specific riddles? It's ridiculous

I vote for The Library when on Legendary and solo. It's just so hard to get through all those Flood

Wow those concepts look amazing. The races sound cool.

That would have been a great idea! Could have made more money for thm

The Dead Rising 2 DLC's were great. I hope this one will live up to its expectations.

I prefer Halo's music over Mass Effect music. Have Mass Effect 1, not a big fan of the type of music used in it. Halo 3 and Reach had orchestrated music which I find very appealing and it captures the moment.

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