VinWarrior Posted June 29, 2012 Report Share Posted June 29, 2012 In 2538 1 Child is abducted from New Mexico on Earth, another Abducted from Visagred on Reach, another abducted from Tetins, New Grandal on Utren, another from Bronx, New York on Earth, and one more from Berad,the city Eand on Harmony. These five along with 30 others are put in to the Spartan II Program in a secret Project directed by General Andrew Taylor called Citadel for Spartan II Recruits for secret missions against the Insurgence, the five above would soon form Revolutionary Squad with the highest clearance and most deadly weapons their first mission after 14 years of training was against the Covenant on Reach the teams names were... Leader: Alex 02-Local= New Mexico Technitian/Pilot: Randall 04-Local=Visagred Sniper: --Unknown-- Sev 07-Local=Tetins CQC: Marco 05-Local=Bronx Medical Expert: Vin 03-Local=Berad Their mission destroy the Spirit of Rebirth a Covenant Ship in orbit of Reach and retrieve the Special Package. They would enter through the Hanger by 2 Warthogs attached to Pelicans as they detached and blew their way in they quickly jumped out of the Warthogs with Jetpacks, a Ranger attacked Sev in-air as Sev pulled out his Rusted Knife and cut him in the face as the team below deployed a Bubble Shield as more Brutes noticed them they ran out as Marco headbutt a Brute finally shooting him, with his Silenced SMG as Randall moves to unlock a Covenant Door, Alex is surrounded as the rest of the squad moved right, he deploys a Grenade and Armor Locks, as he picks up the dead enemy's Spikers dual-wielding them as he moves to the Elite Leader for the Special Objective, the Commanding Elite draws an Energy Gauntlet and a Plasma Pistol he charges stiking the sword into Alex's Arm, Alex badly injured comes back punching the elite to the Ground a Grunt nearby picks up a Plasma Rifle and shoots Alex in hte back Alex pulls out a Magnum killing the Grunt, as he swings for his knife cutting the Elite's eye out, the Elite is reinforced by a squad of other Elite Majors as they surround Alex, Alex injured and out of ammo falls to the floor unconcious, as the elites throw him into a Jail Cell the squad picks up a Grunt Informant who offers to assist the Humans in Allying the Grunts. The remaining squad tries to leave an Elite confronts them, he bears a dark red armor and has an eye covering with a scar, it is the elite commander, he tells the squad, they can leave and their Leader dies or they can surrender and their Leader is free as he picks up a bleeding Spartan, to show them he is serious the Elite Commander shoots his Arm off as the Spartan mortally injured grabs a wire on the floor and shocks the Elite the squad pulls him on to one of the Warthogs and a Pelican Pair and 4 Hornets move in the Pelicans leave while ODSTs on the Hornets deploy a bomb near the Engine Matinance Area and leaves on the Hornets, as the Frigate leaves with the Squad as the Spirit of Rebirth Explodes crashing in the Tamokae Ocean on Reach, soon later the Squad and the Frigate they are housed in is forced to leave Reach and head to Earth at New York, Manhattan as it is being Invaded by Covenant but a Large Weapon appears over Manhattan it launches blowing a hole into New York killing millions. As a sign of revenge they sent the Spratan Team in and they found something that would have been crazy at the start of the war another Covenant Super Carrier appeared over Manhattan and attacked the other ship, wondering the Spartans sent out a signal to the second Covenant Ship and entered through a Sparrowhawk the Spartans head up to the Bridge and see the Commander, he turns around it is the Scarred Elite Commander the Elite Commander welcomes the Spartans and Alex asks the Elites name the Elite responds "Kal Da'se, Commander Kal Da'se" The Elite explains "We fight the Covenant because-" As he is interrupted by Sev who says "Wait, we?" Kal Da'se says "The Brutes fought our kind, now we fight them along with our Grunt and Hunter allies." Vin says "About time we won this war." An Elite Team helps the Spartan Team to take out the Spirit of Tyranny the Covenant Information Feeder above New Mexico as they Use over 7 Phantoms, 16 Banshees, 10 Pelicans, and 13 Hornets to cause a distraction while a Team of 18, 5 Spartans, 4 ODSTs, 3 Elites, 4 Grunts, and 2 Hunters make up the Infiltration Team the Team fights down to the Engine Matinance Area where they plant a Bomb the bomb is accidentally armed before the crew can set the timer, they have 2 minutes they rush down as a locked door is opened by a Grunt Technition named Ratin, opens the door as the team must rush through it, Ratin stays behind to hold off enemies as he is executed by a Jackal who cuts his back open. Then an Elite Solider nemed Tar Da'se, Kal's Brother is shot while trying to get on the Pelican that is evacuating them, he says to go as he is left behind he fights to the end as a Brute picks him up about to execute him as the Explosion flies through the ship, the Spirit of Tyranny is no more, the Battle for New Mexico is won the ship flies to a Fleet of Covenant Ships the Engines are shot out and the Ship dissapears, the crew gone somewhere in Space. They are believed to still be alive on the Shield World, but even if they are Ghosts they made themselves Legends... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smokin Shadowz Posted June 29, 2012 Report Share Posted June 29, 2012 Where did you get this from? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VinWarrior Posted June 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2012 I made it up Shadow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WonderWombat Posted June 29, 2012 Report Share Posted June 29, 2012 Shouldn't the year they were abducted be earlier? It doesn't really make sense if it was in 2538. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VinWarrior Posted June 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2012 They were abducted in 2538 and trained 14 years to complete their training as they were abducted at six. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ϟẘ℮ḓ℮ᾔ Posted June 30, 2012 Report Share Posted June 30, 2012 It's very good. I like it, if you add like 20 more chapters, you could get it published. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZB-85 Posted July 3, 2012 Report Share Posted July 3, 2012 I like this. Very well written, grammar is all right, I really think that you are doing well with this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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