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Hey everyone! On my channel I do Halo 4 weapon review, in which I take a weapon (as requested in the comments of the previous episode) and I go in depth on the details of the gun, talk about what it does and how it's used, then give a visual example of what I explained!

This episode is all about the INCINERATION CANNON! Click the link below to check it out, you can learn a lot you didn't know about the cannon! Also, there you will find a link to episode 1, the PULSE GRENADE! Both are very education videos, which will make you better at the game!

 

Check it out!

 

INCINERATION CANNON : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PtXbf8w93Zw

 

Maqboul

@MaqboulArts

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I do constructive criticism, it's my thing.

 

You babble a lot. I was bored, fast, because you repeated words and sentences. You had no plan to what you were trying to say. I like your idea, and your info is close enough, but you need to write a script before you record this video, because you had no cohesion, no flow, no genuine way of keeping me watching. Or listening.

 

Keep trying, I do like your idea.

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