Team Onyx Creations Machinima Lines

[HSG Forge PRO]

All lines, scripts, and characters(not including the gamer's GT) were created by HSG Forge PRO - David

Main Characters

 

Spartan 517-Alexander(TANK)-Chromello

Spartan 472-Sam(CHAOS)-HSG LoneWolf

Spartan 377-Curtis(SHADOW)-ShotgunSpartnIV

Spartan 426-Michael(ICE)- Holy Focus

Spartan 307-Geoffery(ZEUS)-blastyblast21

Spartan 276-Donavan-FiRePhEoNiX218

Spartan 087-Kelly-Stray Spartan-

Android 776N52001-(SPECIALIST)-HSG legolashot

Android 717C63015-(SHOTTY)-An5chy

Android 725P62260-(HUNTER)-

Battalion Commander-Sulluvan-

Wheelman-Jon(FOEHAMMER)-HSG Forge PRO

Wheelman-Jordan-

ODST's- We need a lot of them...

Marines- We need a lot of them as well

Elites- We also need a lot of them

Characters Ranks

 

Spartan 517-Alexander(TANK)-Commander

Spartan 472-Sam(CHAOS)-General

Spartan 377-Curtis(SHADOW)-Colonel

Spartan 426-Michael(ICE)-Lt. Colonel

Spartan 307-Geoffery(ZEUS)-Leutinent

Spartan 276-Donovan-Lt. Major

Spartan 087-Kelly-Stray Spartan-Major

Battalion Commander-Sulluvan(BC)-Battalion Commander

Wheelman-Jon(FOEHAMMER)-Petty Officer

 

Character's Weapons

 

Character: Primary: Secondary: Equipment:

TANK- Rocket Launcher Spartan Laser Sprint

Machine Gun Turret Drop Sheild

 

CHAOS- AR DMR Sprint

DMR AR Jet Pack

Pistol

 

Curtis- Sniper Rifle DMR Sprint

Pistol Hologram

 

ICE- AR Shotgun Sprint

Pistol

 

ZEUS- DMR AR Sprint

AR DMR

Pistol

 

Donovan- Shotgun Grenade Launcher Sprint

Armor Lock

 

Kelly- Sniper Rifle AR Sprint

Jet Pack

 

Specialist- Sniper Rifle Pistol Sprint

 

Shotty- Shotgun Pistol Sprint

 

Hunter- Rocket Launcher Pistol Sprint

 

Sulluvan- AR Shotgun Sprint

Pistol

 

FoeHammer- Pistol Shotgun -------------

Sprint

 

Jordan- Pistol AR -------------

Sprint

 

Marines- AR Pistol Sprint

Sniper Rifle

Rocket Launcher

Shotgun

 

ODST's- AR Pistol Sprint

DMR

Sniper Rifle

Rocket Launcher

Grenade Launcher

Shotgun

Scenes/ Lines:

 

Scene 1:

 

(Music: ODST theme song)

-Video shows each of the main characters(armor, color, etc.) with their names, one-at-a-time(characters who are in episode: 1)

-(music starts to fade; slowly)

-A team of marines are trying to fight off some covenant... (team of 5) (music ends)

-MARINE LEADER: "C'mon men, give 'em hell!" (Shoots an elite that gets too close, with his shotgun)

-MARINES (in-unison): "Yes seargent! Hooraw!!" (Shoot their AR's in unison)

MARINE(PRIVATE): "There's too many seargent! We can't hold "em off" (Throws a grenade reloads, and continues firing)

-MARINE LEADER: "Don't back down marines!! We need this position secure!"

-MARINE(PRIVATE): "I got this..." (Starts to throw a grenade and gets killed.)

-MARINE(CORPORAL): "No! Private! Jensin...!" (Loads, fires) "Seargent! If we don't move, we're going to end up like Private Jensin!... We need to move now, or somehow get backup! Or else we're going to die."

MARINE LEADER: "No! We're staying marines! We need to hold this position for as long as we can! Command said there were supposed to be ODST's and a team of SPARTAN's on their way. So we need to make sure that they have a nice clean welcome mat." (Shoots his shotgun at another Elite that gets too close.)

-MARINE(CORPORAL): "Seargent, I'm down to three mags left! Contact Command to see what's taking our guest so long!"

-MARINES LEADER: "Command! Command! Come in! Do you read me?! Come in! Command!"

Scene 2:

 

-COMMAND: (marine leaders' voice is being played on the intercomm...)"We read you loud and clear, what's going on?"

-MARINE LEADER: "Command! Where is that backup?! We're running low on ammo and we already have a KIA! Where is that BACKUP!!?"

-COMMAND: "I'm sorry for your bad news. Your backup has had a little resistance and was forced to stop and fight. But they are currently enroute to your position. Their E.T.A. is three minutes."

MARINE LEADER: "They better be, we're down to our last two mags! Seargant Sanders out!"

Scene 3:

 

-MARINE(PFC-#2): "Last mag Seargent! What's the status on our backup?" (Throws a grenade, then fires in bursts.)

-MARINE LEADER: "Command said they have had a little resistance, but are now..."(Shoots an Elite)"...on their way! Their E.T.A. is three minutes."

-MARINE(CORPORAL): "I don't have enough ammo to last that long! If we're going to make it out alive, we need to..."(Gets shot in the head with a needle rifle.)

-MARINES(PFC#1,#2): "No! Laster! Damn Covenant! You're gonna pay now!"(Both throw their last grenade in unison)

-MARINE LEADER: "Cool it men! We've got a job to do. E.T.A. 30 seconds."

Scene 4:

 

(Music: Something halo)

-TANK: "Onyx team! ODST's! And Foehammer!..."(Talking to squad over the COM while in the Warthogs)"...We have a squad of Marines who are being held up by some Covenant. They are trying to hold and secure a tactical firing position and a possible FOB position. They will most likely be low on ammo. And there might even be a few KIA's. We need to get there fast. FoeHammer!"

-FOEHAMMER: "Yes Onyx leader?"

-TANK: "FoeHammer, I need you to double time this hog!"

-FOEHAMMER: "Yes Onyx leader!"

-TANK: "And please call me TANK, FoeHammer."

-FOEHAMMER: "Yes TANK."

(In the distant, a mountain can be seen with a firefight going on)

-FOEHAMMER: "TANK!"

-TANK: "What is it FoeHammer?"

-FOEHAMMER: "We are approuching our destination. A heavy weight firefight is under way. Do you want me to proceed with the arrival?"

-TANK: "Yes FoeHammer, proceed. But drop us off on the other side of the mountain."

(There's a pause in talking while they get closer)

-TANK: "Onyx team, ODST's! Gear up! Check your weapons and ammo! We're going in a little hot!"

Scene 5:

 

-MARINE(PFC#1): "Seargent! I'm out of ammo on my AR! I have 8 mags left with my pistol!"

-MARINE(PFC#2): "****! Out of ammo on my AR as well! I only have 4 mags for my pistol!"

-MARINE LEADER: "It's ok men! We have ourselves some friendlies approuching from 4 o'clock. Looks like our backup is here!"

-MARINES(PFC#1,#2): "Hooraw!"

Scene 6:

 

(Warthog convoy is arriving at the new destination.)

-TANK: "CHAOS! ICE! you're with me! FoeHammer! Stay with the convoy. ODST's! Go through the back side with ZEUS and _____! Double time it!"

Scene 7:

 

-MARINE LEADER: "Spartans! Assist! Seargent Sanders here. Our squad started with five. I lost a Private and a..."(Shoots an Elite)..."Corporal. We are out of ammo and cannot hold this position any more without assistance."

-TANK: "It's ok Seargent. My Spartan team and two ODST's are here with ammo and a convoy out of here. This position can wait for another day. But right now, we need to get the hell out of here!"

-FOEHAMMER: "Sorry for interupting your get-together, but if you want to get out of here with little resistance, then you all need to get your asses over here!"

-CHAOS: "FoeHammer is right! As much as I would like to stay and fight, we need to get these marines out of here!"

-ICE: "TANK! New contacts! These are big! I'm reading at least two Wraiths, three Ghosts, and five Banshees! We don't have the proper firepower to take on these new contacts. We wont survive. We need to-"

-TANK: "-I know ICE."(Takes a short pause, takes a deep breath.)"Spartans, ODST's, Marines, let's move! We need to reach the convoy before the Covenant reach us."

-ZEUS: "TANK. I recon that by the time we reach the convoy, the Banshees will have reached us."

-ICE: "New contact! Wait... I'm reading multiple contacts all over."(Pauses for a few seconds)"Stop! They're camoflaged Elites."

-FOEHAMMER: "TTANK! What's going on? Your blood pressure has just raised. What's going on? Fill me in. Are you ok?"

(The COM is silent for a few seconds)

-TANK: "We have camoflaged Elites around us. We don't know how many there are. I need you to come around and flank the Elites.Hurry!"

-FOEHAMMER: "I'm on my way."

Scene 8:

 

(FoeHammer is sitting in the warthog waiting, looking a the Spartan's vital signs)

-FOEHAMMER: "TANK! What's going on? Your blood pressure has just raised. What's going on? Fill me in. Are you ok?"

(The COM is silent for a few seconds)

-TANK: "We have camoflaged Elites around us. We don't know how many there are. I need you to come around and flank the Elites. Hurry!"

-FOEHAMMER: "I'm on my way."(Drives around the mountain, gets into position to flank the Elites)"I don't see you TANK! I need to know where you are. Respond!"

-TANK: "We're at the bottom of a small cliff that has the shape of a U."

-FOEHAMMER: "Ok, I got you on my radar. I'm coming in. Get ready to fire the "GUN"."

-TANK: "I got you on my radar. Be careful, we don't know were the Elites are at. But they aren't on our radar any more. Hurry! I'm bringing an ODST."

-FOEHAMMER: "I hear you loud and clear. I'm coming around now."

-ICE: "FoeHammer, TANK. Hurry back."

 

ODST Scene:

 

A group of six ODST's are walking through a corridor, checking each room as they go. There are five rooms that they check. three of them have Elites in them. The other two are empty. They finally get to the room on the far end. They push their way in, and assassinate four elites at the same time. Three more Elites come around the corner and get shotgunned in the face. There are four open windows. The leader of the ODST's (gold) tells the two snipers to cover the windows (window watcher) that are facing the same direction. He tells the DMRist to cover one of the open windows. He then tells the one of the ODST's to cover the corner to the room. And he tells the other ODST to cover the entrance to the room. He then covers a window in the room. They read their radars, and notice that there is a massive wave of covenant coming their way. The leader orders the window watchers to open fire when they have a clear sight of the covenant. He then tells the two ODST's that are covering the room that if any covenant break through the barrier, they're theirs. (Big battle scene) An elite finally breaks through the barrier, kills the ODST coverting the corner. The ODST covering the room tells the leader that there is a problem outside the room, but in midsentence, he is killed by the elite.the Elite then proceeds through into the room and is immediately shot down by a sniper bullet. The leader then backs away from his window, and resumes the fallen ODSTs' position outside the room. (Another big battle scene) The Elites have finally stopped coming, and the ODST's gather their equipment, and head out.

Fight Scene

 

-ZEUS: "Marines! Get over here and cover fire! ODST's! Help me get these warthogs back up! TANK! We are trying to do our best to keep them off, but there's just too much. I'm already losing men left and right. You need to hurry your *** up and help us get these warthogs back to operational order!"

-TANK: "I'm going as fast as I can ZEUS. But this procedure takes time. I need you to hold them off a little more. And you are a SPARTAN? Right ZEUS?"

-ZEUS: "Yes TANK. I am a spartan."

-TANK: "Good, then you should be able to flip those warthogs over and get them running again."

-ZEUS: "Yes TANK. ODST's! Give me cover fire while I flip the warthogs! Go go go! Damn UNSC. Why couldn't you have made the warthogs lighter?"

(ZEUS goes behind the hogs so the camera loses site of him and he flips the hogs.)

-ZEUS: "Damn! That was a little difficult. Marines! ODST's! Mount on these hogs! On the double! Move! Those of you who don't fit, will walk beside the hogs. We will provide your ammo. Now move! TANK! You done in there?"

-TANK: "Yes. I'm done. I'm on my way out now. And ZEUS, I have the package. We need to get out of here, now! I rigged this place to blow!"

-ZEUS: "Yes sir! Marines ODST's, cover TANK, he's got an important package that is worth more than your lives! So you need to protect him at all costs. Your lives depend on it!"

-TANK: "Come in FoeHammer. Do you read me?"

-FOEHAMMER: "I read you loud and clear. What's the situation TANK?"

-TANK: "I need an emergency evac and cover fire mission ASAP!"

-FOEHAMMER: "On my way. And I am also bringing another falcon with a very experienced pilot. This is his seventh op.."

-TANK: "Perfect. We'll need all that we can get."

New Flashback Scene:

 

-C.O.: "Are you sure that you are ready to lead men into battle?"

-ALEXANDER(TANK): "Sir. Yes sir."

-C.O.: "Are you sure that you are ready to commit your men into battle, knowing that some, if not most, of them will die?"

-ALEXANDER(TANK): "Yes sir. I'm sure that I'm ready for that."

-C.O.: "Are you sure that you are willing to send your men to their death so that you can complete your objective?"

-ALEXANDER(TANK): "Yes sir. I am sure that I'm ready for that. I'm ready to do anything that is neccesary to complete my object."

-C.O.: "So. Do you think that you have what it takes to be a leader? To send your men into battle, knowing that they will die so that you can complete your objective. Along with all this, you also know that if this AI that you will be taking along, is in danger of being captured, we will have you terminated so that the Covenant are unable to use that AI against us?"

-ALEXANDER(TANK): "Yes sir. I am ready for all of this."

-C.O.: "Well, let me give you some advise. You are not ready for this. you wont be ready for this until you have sent some of your own men, your own friends and sometimes even your own family, to their death. Once you have done this, I will know that you are becoming a leader. That you will be the soldier we need you to be. In addition, when you are a leader, you will need to understabd that when things get too hot, and you call for some backup or an emergency pick-up, you will need to know that you wiill sometimes have to call it off in order to protect the transportation. And, you need to know that there is no back-up or transportation. Sometimes, you have to stay and fight everything off, even if that means that you die, just to protect humanity. Are you sure that you are ready for that?"

-ALEXANDER(TANK): "Yes sir. I am sure that I am ready for all of this. If I have to sacrafice myself, in order to keep humanity safe, then that's what I will need to do."

-C.O.: "Well then, there's only one more thing to do, and that's to make you a SPARTAN."

-ALEXANDER(TANK): "Good. When do we begin, sir?"

-C.O.: "We begin immediately."

Flashback:

 

(Alexander(TANK) is having a flashback to when he wasn't part of Onyx team yet and wasn't known as TANK yet. This was also when Jon, aka FoeHammer, is picking up Alexander, aka TANK, to take him to HQ and meet a new member to his squad, the new member turns out to be new members. Those members are Sam(CHAOS), Michael(ICE), and Geoffery(Zeus).

FOEHAMMER: "How's your day today Spartan?"

ALEXANDER: "I don't want to talk about it!"

FOEHAMMER: "All right, all right. HQ wanted me to pick you up and get you over there as fast as I could."

ALEXANDER: "Why, what do they want this time?"

FOEHAMMER: "They said something about you being a new squad leader, and that their issuing you your new squad member."

TANK: "All right pilot. Get me there ASAP. This is important. Oh, and pilot, what am I supposed to call you? I'm tired of calling you pilot."

FOEHAMMER: "My name is Jon. But I go by FoeHammer."

TANK: "Thats perfect. I hope that you are my pilot again FoeHammer. It was nice talking with you. Tell me, are you a good pilot in an air-to-air combat, or an air-to-ground combat?"

FOEHAMMER: "Yes I am. Infact, I am considered the best pilot out there from a few other Spartans who have had the honor of being in my falcon."

TANK: "That perfect. Well when I'm in need of a pilot, I'll be sure to ask for you."

FOEHAMMER: "Thanks. I'll make sure that I can make it. Alexander, we're here."

TANK: "Thanks for the lift FoeHammer. Hopefully I'll see you soon in the battlefield."

FOEHAMMER: "Good. I'll be looking forward to it."

Inspirational Line

 

-"Success is not determined by the amount of ships we have. It's determined by our force, how we act and react on the enemy. And most important, how well we keep order in the ranks."

Vehicle Battle Scene:

 

(FoeHammer is driving two ODST's in a warthog. A lone Revenant is on a patrol and spots the warthog. The Revenant then starts to pursue the warthog. The Revenant also has a passenger who has a plasma rifle. There are some orders that are said among the humans in the warthog. FoeHammer performs a move in the warthog that catches the Revenant off guard. This move is known as the "Switch-A-Round." And FoeHammer is the only pilot/marine that has master this move with perfection.)

FOEHAMMER: "Alright ODST's. HQ has ordered me to take you two out for a patrol. If there is any trouble, HQ has told me that you two are to follow all of my orders. Is that clear?"

ODST(RED, YELLOW): "Yes sir, we understand."

FOEHAMMER: "Ok. Good. As long as we understand each other."

(This is now the part where the Revenant is pursuing the warthog.)

FOEHAMMER: "ODST's! I'm going to do a manuver that will give you a tactical advantage. When I say to shoot, I want you to shoot. No sooner. And no later!"

ODST'S(RED, YELLOW): "Yes sir!"

(FoeHammer now performs the manuver.)

FOEHAMMER: "Now! Shoot!"

(At this point the Revenant catches on fire, slows down, and blows up.)

FOEHAMMER: "Thats how it's done ODST's!"

[Durandal v2]

FoeHammer as in Pelican Echo-419 Dropship assigned to the 23rd Naval Air Squadron and attached to the UNSC Pillar of Autumn in 2552. Piloted by Captain Carol "Foe Hammer" Rawley. Shot down during the Master Chiefs escape of Installation 04?

[BeckoningZebra1]

Wow, you put a lot of time into this Good Job

[HSG Forge PRO]

Hey Activus, In my machinima I play FoeHammer, and FoeHammer is a guy in it.

 

Oh, and by the way, if anyone wants to join, please message me, I still need parts filled. Thanks, and have a good day.

[haloman 2]

what is this? it says. is it a machinima on youtube? cus if it is i want to watch it. i love machinima. machinima

[HSG Forge PRO]

what is this? it says. is it a machinima on youtube? cus if it is i want to watch it. i love machinima. machinima

Unfortunetly, I was never able to finish the lines, and I was never able to get enough volunteers. And I was never able to record it. And that saddens me, because I would've really liked to have done it, as well as seeing others enjoy it too. But if I get enough volunteers, someone to help me finish the lines, scenes, and maps, and someone who has recording capabilities with a capture card, then I will deffenitly start it back up.