Surveillance Posted January 30, 2014 Report Share Posted January 30, 2014 Alright, thank you. Sorry about that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted February 1, 2014 Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 So what role does china play in all of this exactly ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Composite Armour Posted February 1, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 So what role does china play in all of this exactly ? So far, that depends on if anyone is going to RP as part of them. If not, they'll only have a minor role. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted February 1, 2014 Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 What role would someone have if they wanted to RP as them ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Composite Armour Posted February 1, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 As in what you can be? That'll be done in the Lore. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted February 2, 2014 Report Share Posted February 2, 2014 For example lets say I wanted to be in the china faction what kind of role do they really play in it ( the world ) ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Composite Armour Posted February 4, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2014 Well, if you decide to RP as a member of China, I can swing it so that they engage Russia on the border. Plus, there's always Africa against the GLA. And last, there's the Covenant too. Also, I've been really busy lately, so I haven't been able to update the lore. I'll try and make it up during the weekend. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted February 9, 2014 Report Share Posted February 9, 2014 (edited) Any mods please remove this post as it is not needed. Edited February 12, 2014 by Ranger447 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Surveillance Posted February 9, 2014 Report Share Posted February 9, 2014 I know it isn't my place to critique... but.. seriously ranger? 'Built in translator?' So that means he could go to Rome and understand Latin? Bullcrap Ranger, this isn't Star Wars. To be able to understand every dialect of every language would take thousands of life times. Come on. There is so much other stuff I could talk about but I'll leave Ledgend to it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted February 9, 2014 Report Share Posted February 9, 2014 Fine Halogeek I did a little edit just for you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Composite Armour Posted February 9, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2014 I've sent you the PM detailing what needs to be fixed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted February 9, 2014 Report Share Posted February 9, 2014 (edited) I saw it and I think I fixed it all. Name : Jhon is his real name but his nickname most people call is RangerSex: maleAge: 27Faction: ECABranch: CommandoRank: captain ( 447 is his commando Number )Appearance: White skin , Brown hair , Blue eyes . bald cut and no facial hair to speak ofArmour : Look like Boss from delta squad Big bulky and can withstand a lot of bullet with white as the main and orange as the secondary couler Equipment: L85A4 Silenced 5.56mm assault rifle, L96A2 448. Magnum bolt-action Sniper rifle, standard issue combat knifeLanguage(s):Fluent in Russian , African , English , France , Germany , Italy , China , AmericaRole: Goes behind enemy lines and causes havoc ( infiltrator )Brief History: Born in London into a poor family and soon a orphan he grew up on the streets and fended for himself he always wanted to be in the Army so when he was 18 he joined and was put into a squad a brilliant shot and had a brilliant tactical mind but could not fit into the squad life and became a lone wolf going behind enemy lines and now with ECA on the brink of defeat they need him more than ever. Edited February 10, 2014 by Ranger447 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Surveillance Posted February 9, 2014 Report Share Posted February 9, 2014 Let us begin. Languages: Nobody knows 7 languages by the time they are 27. That would take a long time and dedication not in the military. Pick 2, three at max and I'll check. If you choose Chinese as a second one, no more because Mandarin, not sure if you noticed, is pretty difficult. Armour: This isn't Star Wars, so looks nobody looks like that. Just because we have the Covenant in this doesn't mean anybody can be a Spartan or a Clone Trooper. And think about it, CLONE TROOPER? Are we doing Halo or Star Wars; Halo. Now big bulky armour that withstands tons of bullets is unrealistic. The closest they have is ballistic vests and Kevlar, which won't withstand a high caliber sniper or rapid machine gun. It may stop assault rifles, but it sure as hell will leave some bruises. Plus, an infiltrator would rely on stealth, and a ballistic vest will slow you down. Branch: I don't want to pretend that I know more about your own country than you do, but come on! Once again, this isn't Star Wars. If you want to be a Special Forces Operative, think about the SAS or UKSF. Backstory: I had trouble reading the back story, maybe it was just the grammar but that isn't the point. I know Ledgend isn't really pissy about backstory, but it seems kind of generic. And also it makes it seem like you are the hero of the ECA: 'they need him more than ever'. I'm sure they need all of their highly skilled special forces operatives more than ever. (Ledgend, feel free to correct me) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted February 10, 2014 Report Share Posted February 10, 2014 (edited) What they do need him more than ever they are on the brink of defeat they need every man women and child more than ever. EDIT I did a little edit just for you again but ledgend was fine with he backstory and the commando stuff and he isn't very stealthy but can be if he wishes and this guy goes around the world a ton and needs to know a ton of Languages but fine maybe it is unreal but who cares it has got aliens in but fine he is 31 now for clear that up. So there he is fine now if you say he is kind of like SW he is using the best tech the ECA has to offer. Edited February 10, 2014 by Ranger447 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Surveillance Posted February 10, 2014 Report Share Posted February 10, 2014 1. I couldn't understand anything you wrote 2. Humans have limits. You aren't going to be able to remember 7 languages while doing military things. I don't care what if he is 31 or not. Ledgend, I tried. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted February 11, 2014 Report Share Posted February 11, 2014 I looked it up you can actually learn 7 different languages and also American is not really a languages so I guess I am fluent in 6. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Composite Armour Posted February 11, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2014 Make the changes Halogeek asked and I'll accept the character. Except for branch, that should be called simply "ECA Commandos". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted February 11, 2014 Report Share Posted February 11, 2014 (edited) Any mods please remove this post as it is no needed. Edited February 12, 2014 by Ranger447 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D-38 Boss Posted February 11, 2014 Report Share Posted February 11, 2014 I saw it and I think I fixed it all. Name : Jhon is his real name but his nickname most people call is Ranger Sex: male Age: 27 Faction: ECA Branch: Commando Rank: captain ( 447 is his commando Number ) Appearance: White skin , Brown hair , Blue eyes . bald cut and no facial hair to speak of Armour : Look like Boss from delta squad Big bulky and can withstand a lot of bullet with white as the main and orange as the secondary couler Equipment: L85A4 Silenced 5.56mm assault rifle, L96A2 448. Magnum bolt-action Sniper rifle, standard issue combat knife Language(s):Fluent in Russian , African , English , France , Germany , Italy , China , America Role: Goes behind enemy lines and causes havoc ( infiltrator ) Brief History: Born in London into a poor family and soon a orphan he grew up on the streets and fended for himself he always wanted to be in the Army so when he was 18 he joined and was put into a squad a brilliant shot and had a brilliant tactical mind but could not fit into the squad life and became a lone wolf going behind enemy lines and now with ECA on the brink of defeat they need him more than ever. How dare you take my armor.... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Surveillance Posted February 11, 2014 Report Share Posted February 11, 2014 Ranger... I don't want to keep bugging but... GOD DAMNIT. Didn't I tell you 3 max? Yet you know four and am learning 2 more. I don't even... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted February 12, 2014 Report Share Posted February 12, 2014 Halogeek you can learn more than 4 Language in your life it is possible he needs to as he moves around a lot in undercover ops to boot it is possible you can learn like 8 or 9 I think in a lifetime. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Surveillance Posted February 12, 2014 Report Share Posted February 12, 2014 Here is the fact of the matter. Learning a new language takes time and practice every day. Your character does not have that time when Europe is on the brink of a full political, social, economic, and military collapse. They want you to kill the enemy, not talk to them. If you want to RP, make the changes I asked for. I'm not going to tell you again. 3 languages max, and if Chinese is the second one, no more. AND YES. I know it is possible to learn more than three languages but it's not like you have 5 Rosetta Stones when fighting a war! Once again, make the changes I asked, or you will not be RPing. I am sick and tired of you researching human ability, when all I want you to do, is pick two or three languages!!!!!! How hard is it??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted February 12, 2014 Report Share Posted February 12, 2014 (edited) This post is no longer needed any Mods feel free to delete it.. Edited February 15, 2014 by Ranger447 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted February 12, 2014 Report Share Posted February 12, 2014 I almost forgot ... How do the covenant fit into this ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sιlεƞτ Aʟρнα Posted February 14, 2014 Report Share Posted February 14, 2014 Name: Sarah Cooper Sex: Female Age: 17 Faction: ECA Branch: ECA army Rank: private Appearance: 5"4' tall, blonde hair and green eyes. She's a bit thin also. Armour appearance: a black standard ceramic vest, and little other armor. Equipment: ump .45 SMG, P9 9mm. Pistol Language(s): English, French. Role: cqb specialist. Brief History: she was born and raised in England, being a bit shy in school she rarely fought, but she could hit harder than her brother, whom was two years younger. She befriended a traveling person of Arabic decent, when she was younger. She was conscripted to fight at the age of seventeen, being old enough to fight for the ECA's survival. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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