Popular Post Is not JL Posted January 26, 2014 Popular Post Report Share Posted January 26, 2014 (edited) PROLOGUE "Cheers!" *Kling!* *Klang!* The sounds came about as the many members lifted their cups high, whether it be a beer can, wine glass or, for the underaged, a plastic squirt bottle from the coolest sportswear shop in town. There were quite a few cheers, along with the one or two loud "Hoo!!!!"s that that one guy always shouted out loud. It was a memorable evening - apart from RedStarRocket's promotion this was the first time there was an addition of staff. All the usual members had come to the party to celebrate the addition of Bnus, Dog, BeckoningZebra1 and D-38 Boss to the city's civil service staff. Little did they know - that evening was going to change it all. The usual round of congratulations had come and gone, and by now people were going about, having conversations with each other. Some were discussing about Halo; others laughing at CoD, and even more questioning what the perfect timezone would be. In the corner, Drizzy_Dan had shuffled over towards BeckoningZebra1, a scheme already hatched within his mind. "So," Drizzy asked with a smile on his face, waving his hands about as he spoke, "News group, huh? Guess you're working with me now! Great!" BeckoningZebra1 nodded, smiled nervously, then nodded more. "Anyways, life has been really hitting me hard, man. All those weekly updates I used to postpone days late are now monthly updates that I postpone till after the month ends. So....." BeckoningZebra1 nodded, gave a larger smile as he realized where this was about to go, then nodded more. "It would be greaaaaat," Drizzy said as he outstretched his hands for visual emphasis, "If you could, y'know. Help out with the wrapups. All of them." BeckoningZebra1 nodded and smiled like a robot, "S-sure! I'd love to. That's why I, uh, accepted this job! Helping out, y'know? Gotta give back to the site and city." As he said it, he quickly glanced over towards Drizzy's hands. Small but perceptible, the deep cerulean ring that Drizzy wore to show his moderator status refracted the chandelier light in a brilliant blue that even made BZ1 jealous. Oh, the powers that ring had......meanwhile, all he had was a cyan name tag. "Anyways, just a....promotional hint. If you need pictures of the scene, just say that you're the victim's kid. Doesn't even need to have a victim - all the guys on the internet just make some tumblr or instagram post about sadness and stuff and let you through. Good luck in your new job!" Drizzy concluded, before taking another drink. BeckoningZebra1 thanked him with a smile, then stood up. He was fairly certain that any more and he'd end up having to take care of not just the wrapup but Drizzy as well. As he began to leave, though, he noticed something peculiar in the corner of his eye. A single, red dot that looked surprisingly familiar.......... Then the shot came. BANG! Fwua-Thwat! There was a flash of white as BZ1 was flung back by an invisible force. However, he knew exactly what that had been - the moderator's powerful defenses. Looking up and expecting Drizzy to have already begun filing a report, he was surprised - and horrified - of what remained of Drizzy_Dan - the bullet had pierced his brain and exited the other side. Blood was over the walls and floors, along with bits and pieces of.....cyan and blue. That silly smile of being able to be a bit more lazy was still plastered on his face, now a hideous parody of what it once was, the corner of his lip still twitching. Behind the strong willed Zebra, somebody lurched. Surprised, in shock, as well as in pain and confusion from the kinetic blast that had hit him, the recently-promoted collapsed to his knees. What he simply didn't understand was how the moderator's shield had been pierced. Slowly, the body of Drizzy_Dan faded away, but not before everything turned black. He was banned. Moderator reports had investigated the scene, as well as looked for a way to unban Drizzy_Dan, but whatever the bullet - whatever the tool was, it somehow managed to override the programming of the city. And despite having found the place the sniper had fired by looking at trajectory, glass shattering, and SCIENCE, they found absolutely no trace. Today was not a good day. * * * Yeah, okay. I - ok. Got it. This'll be a serial epicomedy story that basically focuses around a FULLY FICTIONAL version of 343industries.org that exists effectively as a city where members live in, and is governed by our staff. If you don't want me writing you into this story, please do PM to me. If you want to be a more recurring star in the story, PM me as well. Lets see how this goes. Reviews and constructive criticism is welcome. However, english is not my first language so you automatically can not make fun of me. ===================== Chapter Index - Although honestly you should just read through everything. PSA's, announcements, Guest Star Submission sheet, all those things you miss. 1. Because the last one was called a prologue 2. First Contact 3. Town of Pricks 4. More than just the one 5. Weapon of the banned 6. Deal of two mods 7. Hunters and liars 8. The Trifecta of Pricks 9. Force Blightning 10. Legend of Doge 11. Legend of Doge Part 2 12. And you thought this was done. Legend of Doge Part 3 13. Just to rack my brain 14. Frosted 15. Spawning Issues 16. Lag, please. 17. Meow 18. Vaults, Trolls and a hint of a Gary Stu Edited July 31, 2014 by Ignited Bullet 12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drizzy_Dan Posted January 26, 2014 Report Share Posted January 26, 2014 Despite me dying by being shot in the head by a sniper I gotta say you are a good writer JL. This whole murder mystery thing has some good potential! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Surveillance Posted January 26, 2014 Report Share Posted January 26, 2014 I love all of it. I wonder who that sniper was... Who would want Drizzy taken out.... hmmm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azaxx Posted January 26, 2014 Report Share Posted January 26, 2014 Someone must be bitter if they decided to take out best staff member. Drizzy_Dan never forget. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeckoningZebra1 Posted January 26, 2014 Report Share Posted January 26, 2014 Behind the strong willed Zebra, somebody lurched. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VinWarrior Posted January 26, 2014 Report Share Posted January 26, 2014 (edited) This looks awesome bro, after this is over, we need to make an RP of this. I'm telling you it'd be a hit, cannot wait to find out... WHO BANNED DRIZZY_DAN?! Edited January 26, 2014 by Edward Kenway 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buns Posted January 26, 2014 Report Share Posted January 26, 2014 Is Twam like an evil mayor that is power hungry and corrupt? also WHO BANNED DRIZZY_DAN?! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pbrabbit Posted January 26, 2014 Report Share Posted January 26, 2014 I love this! I hope to see lots more of this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted January 26, 2014 Report Share Posted January 26, 2014 Well done and I cannot wait to see more but the question is WHO KILLED KENNEY ! wait I messed up my line I meant WHO KILLED DRIZZY ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Surveillance Posted January 26, 2014 Report Share Posted January 26, 2014 LOL, an RP would be amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Is not JL Posted January 26, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2014 (edited) Okay, so I've gotten quite a few requests by PM to be a part of the story. I've decided to implement a Guest Star system in this thread, so basically, like submitting for an RP you fill out a simple character profile. If you want the fictional you to have a specific role in the story, that belongs in PM. Guest Star Profile Name: Weapon(s): (Anything. Does not need to be Halo related.) Appearance: Skills and Powers:Bio: Edited January 27, 2014 by Magical Love 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zelda Posted January 27, 2014 Report Share Posted January 27, 2014 I'll be in the story. Just surprise me. Surprises are more fun. My only request, is that I dont wanna be the bad guy. But I love the story so far. lmao. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spyro Posted January 27, 2014 Report Share Posted January 27, 2014 I would love to appear in this story, good guy, bad guy, or just a random member on the streets. Doesn't matter at all. Also, you're fairly well gifted in this, I hope to see more as time goes on, and more importantly, to find out who's doing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VinWarrior Posted January 27, 2014 Report Share Posted January 27, 2014 Name: Edward Kenway Weapon(s): Dual Swords Appearance: Same as Edward Kenway in ACIV Skills and Powers: Parkour, Eagle Vision. Bio: Edward Kenway was a longtime member of the 343i City, but a few months into his time, he disappeared for quite some time, recently resurfacing as a secretive detective and News Reporter, having a hand in what news is published and who publishes it. He was also a guest at the new staff's inauguration and Drizzy's ban, making him a suspect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Surveillance Posted January 27, 2014 Report Share Posted January 27, 2014 Name: HaloGeek Weapon(s): Staff of Ice Appearance: (This is me when I'm angry, but I look mellow when I am normal) Skills and Powers: Invincible to Cold and Ice, able to call on the Russian Winter to freeze foes, good at scaring peopleBio: HaloGeek was made during the winter of 1940, in the Soviet-Finnish War. Little did the Soviet children know, HaloGeek was the Spirit of WInter, and he controlled its every move. After World War 2, he traveled across the world until he finally made it to 343i Community Forum in 2012, which welcomed him happily. He was absent at the time of Drizzy's assassination, but he showed up after. Currently he is in 343ICF, wondering about Drizzy's case. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Is not JL Posted January 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2014 OUTTAKE 1.1 "Awwww, you sho kyuuuute. You wanna build a snoooooowmaaaaaan?" Zelda cooed as she nudged HaloGeek around. In annoyance, the snowman who looked like a shark with snow on him (Zaboazagiru's cousin?) bared his fangs. Zelda simply hugged him back, curious of how HaloGeek didn't lose his snow, but more just happy of all the fluffs she could hug. "Stay with me for ever and ever, ok?" she mumbled before tapping the snowman on his non-existent nose. HaloGeek's head turned, then his cheeks began to melt off. * * * Edward looked around. Although he was quite an Assassins Creed fan, he did find it interesting and fun to run around the city after dark with his PDA, pretending to be Aiden Pierce. On this particular evening he was out looking for evidence that the modmins may have missed by using his Eagle Vision coupled with science, but it seemed he was running into a problem. "Pills for happiness!" The popup said. Edward closed it. Immediately, another one rang out. "Buy Call of Duty for the price of Battlefield and get Medal of Honor for free!" it said, and once again he shut it before trying to run an app. It was just too bad that his gold expired, and he was forced to live for the next few days on silver. "Get Skyrim free!" the next ad shook out to him, a familiar green symbol beside it. At once, he turned off his PDA. Edward Kenway did not condone piracy. * * * Drizzy looked around. He recognized this place. He was banned. It looked fine - blue sky, green trees. He had spawned in a clearing. But everything was wrong. Space was distorted; time was wrong. Everything was nauseating, and already he could feel himself tire out. It was hard to make sense of the banned, and he didn't know his direction around. However, he did know how to navigate through the pocket world where the banned existed - being a moderator required sufficient training within the land of the banned. It was time to go look for help. 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gojira Posted January 27, 2014 Report Share Posted January 27, 2014 Name: The Kilburnator Weapons: M41-A Pulse Rifle,The Boomstick, Modified Chainsaw, Metal Hand, and an Ithaca Model 37. Appearance: Skills/Powers: Able to equip various modified weapons to his right arm's stump, able to travel through space and time, owns the title of "The Biggest Bad*** of all Time",has witty remarks, is a ladies man, his chin causes instant death in trolls and lesser human beings and creatures, and of course is groovy. Bio: The Canadian Alternate dimensional version of Ashley J. Williams. He has survived the events of the Evil Dead trilogy, travels through time and dimensions to destroy the Necronomicon and to battle aliens, deadites, cyborgs from the future and other ne'er do wells. He fought in every conflict in human history, and is the only being who has defeated Chuck Norris in battle. After teaming with Master Chief, Bruce Campbell, The Shredder and James Hetfield to defeat Dimension X Satan and Raptor Jesus, he began his vacation to 343i Community forums in 2013 and was also absent during the event of Drizzy's assassination but has vowed to hunt the one who wields the BanSniper. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zelda Posted January 27, 2014 Report Share Posted January 27, 2014 I love how I am a few short circuits in the brain. I have to be if I am hugging an evil snowman. lol. I just love this story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Is not JL Posted January 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2014 Name: Matthew J. Williams Sorry, but as much as it seems like it might be, this isn't a full RP, and your name is still your display name/name you are known for. It's on the profile simply so I know who the Guest Star application actually is for once I profile it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Surveillance Posted January 27, 2014 Report Share Posted January 27, 2014 (edited) This was simply amazing! Zelda, this relationship cannot go on. Edited January 27, 2014 by HaloGeek Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gojira Posted January 27, 2014 Report Share Posted January 27, 2014 Sorry, but as much as it seems like it might be, this isn't a full RP, and your name is still your display name/name you are known for. It's on the profile simply so I know who the Guest Star application actually is for once I profile it. Changed, and thanks for the heads up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spyro Posted January 28, 2014 Report Share Posted January 28, 2014 So when's the next part? :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Is not JL Posted January 28, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2014 So when's the next part? :3 Within the next 2 years. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted January 28, 2014 Report Share Posted January 28, 2014 If I can suggest something it would be post the story in the original post with spoilers to every chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ranger Intel Posted January 28, 2014 Report Share Posted January 28, 2014 Love it. Hope to see a Part 2 coming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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