SGT Warchild Posted October 9, 2011 Report Share Posted October 9, 2011 Me and a freind have been making several halo stories, we aren't pro spellers so please never mind the mistakes and this doesn't neccisarily fit into the halo tales, these are not part of the real halo, and have no guide lines like the books do, our stuf is our imagination put on the internet, we are planning on posting a halo story every week, I hope you enjoy these stories as mutch as we did making them, here is our first story, and if you hate long reads, well this is one of those long reads: God that back wound i have is killing me *grunts*Report . 10:29am*shighs stiffly* great just greatReport . 10:30amuh hand me your pistol with armor piercing rounds.... *grabs medkit on wall and pulls out biofoam*I'm ready.. give it... Report . 10:30amhands it* here Report . 10:30amI'l haft to do this fast once the sword comes out...*puts biofoam in left hand and grabs Pistol in the right* *shoots elite in the balls and as it grunts and pulls the sword out in pain uses bio foam to keep Alex from bleeding out**kicks elites feet out from under him* *grabs dropped energy sword and cuts of it's head**calls for immediate evac to the Savanna for treatment* come on man.. just a few more minutes and that drop ship will be here!!*pullls alez into a corner and hands pistol* *pulls metal crates for cover and grabs Assualt rifle**pulls alex into corner almost forgeting him* Report . 10:36amThanks kurt, i owe you one..., *hears stactic and fight over com* Report . 10:38am*shoots cloaks elites* *kills 3 drops ones shield* *pulls out combat knife* *stabs 3 elites in the neck* 8spins around and kicks one in the chest and jumps off to get behind elite commanser and stabs him in the back**faces the arbiter* bring it!! * Arbiter yells retreat and all the warriors running away deactivate camo and shows a hundred that where thare the whole time* holly **** *calls Savanna for a mac* *Savanna fire 2 round and kills around 30 elites each shot* *over radio* fire missles!! *missles impactact and throw the elites to the ground... dead**stomps toward the wounded arbiter* *pulls out Assualt rifle and puts the barrel in his mouth* any last words?Arbiter: none for you Demon *pulls out knife and stabs im in the leg* is thatLL*all?!*Arbiter yells in pain* *kills the arbiter with a 3round burst and fires at other random spots of the body*Savanna: evac in 30secs Report . 10:46am*spots Covnenat Captail ship above Savanna* Incomeing!!! Report . 10:46am*pulls a discruntled alex towards evac zone and lightly places him in the pelican* take him up pilot Pilot: what about you? I haft to finish the fight*grabs radio* orbital macs fire!!*looks for the elite that called for the ship* dammit!! *watches as the ship explodes into large chumks of medal* oh **** *metal impacts around and a large chunk hits**punches through wreckage and calls for a report* Savanna: its ok spartan, everyones safeGood, I'm staying here, those elites didn't have drop ships... I'm going to look for an encampment, Spartan out*sees a ghost and rides toward the supposed encampment**sees drop ships flying above huge covie encampment and a Covenant Supper carrier dropping troops*woah, savanna I have eyes on a huge covie encampment, I'm sending feed, do you see this?!Savanna: I'm calling in the calvary, also your spartan friend is up, hes itching for a fight, he'll come with the reinforments, we're sending 6 tanks and 6 platoons of marines, also we are going to call in for more ships and provideMACs from the orbital defense grid, that encampment will fall!Thanks Savanna, when will the reinforements arrive? Savanna: 20 minutes, we're sending in odst's they'll drop in 30secs, your spartan friend is on one, you're the ranking officer, tell us your orders sir. Give them hell. Savanna the first salvo of missles are fired, the macs have just shot off their first rounds. Wait... covenant ships inbound, sorry spartan no more missles or macs, we've got a bigger problem!!Understood, odst's, an army of marines, tanks, and 2 spartans are over kills for this, good luck Savanna Report . 11:00am*Radios Kurt* hey kurt try to stop the covenant without me? Report . 11:01am*sees odst drop pods hit the ground around him* Alex pops out with a rocket launcher* couldn't do it without ya man * looks over to the odst's assembleing around him* over radio so even the inbound drops ships can hearThat encampmen is the only thing thats in our way from stopping their ground attacks, are you ready men?unsc troops: hell yes spartan!!Then give them hell!! Report .11:03amnice to know i'll get my fare share of kills this time around. Report . 11:04am*drops ships drop down and hundreds of marines pop out and run towards the encampment yelling with heroism* come on Alex they're starting!! ODST's move out!!*picks up spartan laser* Hoo-ra!! *odst's and spartans run towards the covies* Marines give us a holes to go in!! *missles streak past and blow a hole in the barriers*Scorpian tanks move up!! Alex I want you commending the tank, think your up for it? Report . 11:06amHell yeah i am. Report . 11:06amthen get on them and blow up the hunter and vehicles!!Odst's fire at those guns emplacements!! Report . 11:07amroger that *starts up Scorpain tank* *Kills two hunters in one shot* Report . 11:08am*shoots 2 elites and blows up a wraith with the laser* marines and odst's cut down the horde of elites grunts and jackels**sees alex's shot* nice! I'll haft to catch up...*shoots spartan laser and kills 5 hunters**runs into athe baracks and kills covies with the assualt rifle* marines hows it going?Marines, sir their retreating to the grav liftReport . 11:10amthanks , and you to, oh sh........... *misses Fuel rod gun rods* damn it where the heel he come from? Report . 11:11amtheir over to your left, but wait a second, tell the tanks to fire and that ship!!marines and odst's fire your missles!! Report . 11:11amDamn it, Roger that kurt. *tankers shift fire on that ship. Report . 11:12am*hundreds of missles streak past then 6Scorpian heavy round inpact the ship*soldiers:Hoo-ra!! Report . 11:12amhell yeah thats what i'm talking about. Report . 11:12am*savanna all covenant on the ground distroyed, hows the space doing for ya?Savanna: their every where!!*sees covenant artillery*alex fire at the ships their breaking through towards here!!*gets on fuel rod turret*odst's grab some!!*odst's get on other turrets and use the weopons against them*marines their close enouph for missles, fire!! Report . 11:15amRoger that Kurt. *Fires Tanks version of Mac Round at ships Recator* Report . 11:15am*missles streak past**several drop ships and even supper carriers explode* only a little more, keep firingReport . 11:16am*increaes rate of fire on tank* *orders other takers to do the same*Report . 11:17am*gets out and fires laser and inbound BANSHEES* podst's fire at them, all other troops fire at those drop ships, tanks fire at the ships!!*fires at banshees* *the banshee hits an imbound drop ship*ODST: sire thier jumping!!****!!GET DOWN*drops to the ground* Report . 11:19amRoger that, *Tankers shift fire to midship on Covenant ship* Report . 11:19amtank crews get out and dig in this will cause major damage!!*light envelopes the sky as the ships go into slipspace* Report . 11:20am*tankers get out running* hit the deck! Report . 11:21am*wind sheers at the troops and they go flying**the wind stops and all ships are gone*Progress report is everyone ok?!Troops: yes sir, but many wounded, we lost few men taking this camp!!All marines: WE WON!!*radios savanna* we need evac, many wounded, also we need a barial detail overSavanna: this was a major victory spartan!!al in a days workSavanna: new orders from oni, get up here on a drops shipyes sir, you heard him alex come on*goes to the closest drop ship as many odst's cheer at us* Report . 11:25ami'm comeing kurt. question is what the hell did we just win anyway, why where the covenant here? Report . 11:26amhell if I know, thats oni's problem, but for now we need some mutch needed rest, but first we need to look over our new orderswe're docking...come on get to the elevator...*gets inside elevator* Captain we're on our way up*punches button to the bridge* Report . 11:27amyeah i guess your right.Report . 11:28am*looks at alex, I'm sure these orders will get us some where dangerous, go to the barracksclicks button to the barracks and enter bridge*sir!Captain: at ease*the captain drops a document into my hands*captain: your new mision spartan, go into cryo, its a long way to our next destination*looks at document* Alex, we're going on a stealth mssion, get something to eat, then get into cryoit will be 3 day before we reach it Report . 11:34ami had a feeling ONI needed us for a mission. alright thou lets just hope though ship food is better than those damn mre's, oh linda ask me to give this to you, she said something you might forget between the two of you. I hope you liked this and the second part will come saturday or sunday Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Substandard IQ Posted October 9, 2011 Report Share Posted October 9, 2011 Interesting but very hard to understand, try putting it into more friendly reading terms, and add spaces and paragraphs and quotation marks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Substandard IQ Posted October 9, 2011 Report Share Posted October 9, 2011 Also fix the spelling errors haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SGT Warchild Posted October 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2011 Interesting but very hard to understand, try putting it into more friendly reading terms, and add spaces and paragraphs and quotation marks we know this already, it is on our to do lists, we'll do the best we can Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Absolute Dog Posted October 9, 2011 Report Share Posted October 9, 2011 we know this already, it is on our to do lists, we'll do the best we can Kurt I will take a shot at helping you with a start on how to format it if you would like. Give me permission to copy and paste the story into my text writer and I will try some different styles and email it to you. I offer this a genuine help, not trying to get involved in the story line. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SGT Warchild Posted October 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2011 Kurt I will take a shot at helping you with a start on how to format it if you would like. Give me permission to copy and paste the story into my text writer and I will try some different styles and email it to you. I offer this a genuine help, not trying to get involved in the story line. I'll be sure to tell John Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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