MJTOWER Posted November 27, 2014 Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 hey guys, im writing a bunch of amazing new halo books and your going to love them. ive already written WRATH OF THE ANCIENT and im writing THE RIFT WARS and also im writing THE SENGHELI OF REDEMPTION. like this and follow or friend me for status updates and possible scenarios from certain portions of my book. thaks for the support so far guys! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted November 27, 2014 Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 Well if you have written them please post them. I would love to read them for enjoyment and to see if I can improve my own writing. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJTOWER Posted November 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 here are chapters from the already finished book to select and vote for a quote or passage from" CHAPTER 8: FIRST ENCOUNTER CHAPTER 10:INVASION CHAPTER 11:NEW COVENANT choose from these three and vote on them and ill read you a section of one of them. keep in mind, I HAVE NOT PUBLISHED THIS YET AND I AM PENDING COPYRIGHT PERMISSION FROM 343 SO IF YOU WORK FOR 343, PLEASE GIVE ME PERMISSION. if you are from 343, i will not give you any speciel preview, no matter what due to safety reasons. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted November 27, 2014 Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 I would prefer chapter one.... But if I had to vote from the ones you set out for me... Chapter 8 first encounter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJTOWER Posted November 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 also, can someone please tell me how to use the shoutbox? i cant seem to figure out how. LOL ok, but im going to have to wait a day to let more users read this and vote, because i want to let people read a good one. ive only typed 14 out of 21 chapter anyway. ive hand written all of them so far, and the beginning chapters of 4 other books,so... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted November 27, 2014 Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 You need to post five times. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJTOWER Posted November 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 thanks, and subscribe to my youtube channel, its MASTERSPARTAIN8 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted November 27, 2014 Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 Wait? So am I going to get to see a chapter? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJTOWER Posted November 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 ok, i guess i could post the prologue, if you'd like... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted November 27, 2014 Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 Yes please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJTOWER Posted November 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 ok... here goes! Prologue: [Deep space message//Origin: UNSC//Location: Unknown//] DATE: October 12, 2586 [Audio only: CPTN THOMAS LASKY OF UNSC JUPITER CLASS I] “Corporal Grant of Fireteam Omega, of the UNSC Swift of Night, reporting sir. Requesting immediate assistance! We were sent here to explore this… Mega planet…It’s too big to be artificial… and as we dug deeper into the depths of the strange structures, we found something… something VERY bad! Send immed…” (Static over radio) [END OF MESSAGE] its a bit sloppy, but this is the beginning, and i couldnt think of how to start it, so i improvised, and it just flowed and stuck so... vote 1 through 10 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted November 27, 2014 Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 Well.... cant you just post a few chapters? It would be nice to read and may help improve my writing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJTOWER Posted November 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 ugh i hate the prologue! heres chapter 1... not too good either, but better. im going to have this made into a trilogy, with 3 different parts of the story. future, past, end. ok, now for chapter 1. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted November 27, 2014 Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 Alright then.... *looks around* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJTOWER Posted November 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 keep in mind... ive already got copyrights to this so i can sue you if you try to publish yor own off of this without my permission. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted November 27, 2014 Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 .... Why would I try to steal someone's fan fiction? I merely want to read it..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJTOWER Posted November 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 CHAPTER 8: FIRST ENCOUNTER Lasky walked into the hangar, irritated, and said,” marine, do you know the protocol on bringing alien creatures on board my ship without proper authority? I damn well could just place you under arrest for disregard of protocol!” “I’m sorry, sir, but the guardians said…” “I don’t give a **** what these things said! Unless you give me one good reason not to, I’m going to expel you all from the ship!” “Well, they said that they need transportation to the HALO’s to destroy the flood. They also said they know the new race that’s been attacking us. All we need to do to get them to talk is provide them with a room on the ship.” Jenkins said nervously. “You never follow your god damned orders, do you? **** this, give them environment sector 4 environment chamber. And I want to see you in my office as soon as they’re secure, understand?” Lasky ordered. He then turned on a heel and headed for the elevator to the bridge. “Well, I guess we had better get moving… follow me.” As soon as Jenkins turned around, he spotted a team of Spartans in black and white armor… Holy ****! It’s SPEC-OPS Team! Wow, he never thought he would get to see them in person, especially because of their reputations… “What the hell are you just standing there for, marine!? GET YOUR ASS MOVING!” the bulky one said. He must be the leader of spec ops… he chose to listen, before he found out first hand that the Spartans really could rip a man apart limb from limb. Fifteen minutes later, Jenkins walked into the captains’ office, prepared to have to defend himself against Lasky’s wrath. “Marine, who gives you the right to choose what to do on the field? You had no authority to make that call, yet you still decided to disobey me! You had one set of orders: ‘scout the area, report unusual sightings’. Why, then, have you brought these creatures on my ship? WHY THE HELL DOESN’T WHAT I SAY MATTER!?” He picked up a lamp on his desk, shattered it against the wall, and looked at Jenkins. “I want you on civilian control in NEW EUPHRADES for the next 3 months, understand?” “Yes sir…” Jenkins said, disappointed in himself. “Well? GET OUT OF MY SIGHT!” Jenkins turned and hurried out the door as fast as his feet could carry. Meanwhile, the captain stepped off the elevator into the bridge. “Give me a status report, Colonel Williams.” “Sir, we have a non-responsive engineer team and 3 non-responsive trooper squads. Otherwise all systems green, sir.” “How long ago did the teams go dark?” “Twenty-two minutes ago, captain.” “Well, send spec-ops team to investigate. We might as well make use of them while their here.” Lasky turned and stared out the ships viewport, into the cold, dark void known as space. Could it, he thought, be serious enough for sterilization? No, spec-ops could get it done, they always have before. this is a segment of chapter 8 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted November 27, 2014 Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 The writing was a little basic for my tastes but I still liked it. Though Lasky sweared too much and he should have given Jenkins a chance to defend himself. Still it was good, hope to see more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJTOWER Posted November 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 sorry for the language, but it gives it flavor and intensity well, thats like only one percent of the chapter... its the third longest chapter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted November 27, 2014 Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 Once again.... I would love to see much more of this. No reason to hide it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJTOWER Posted November 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 well, my agent advised against me posting anything online, so... im going to listin to my agent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted November 27, 2014 Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 Agent? wait you have an agent for a fan fiction? Dude its the damm internet what are we going to do with it?! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJTOWER Posted November 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 jk dude...im only 14... my mom said for me not to post anything on it till i publish it, but you know.. heyn caboose, friend me please! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buns Posted November 27, 2014 Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 You cannot publish fanfiction because you do not own the Halo IP(and chances are never will unless you can pay billions to buy it from Microsoft) You can always post your finished product(no one is going to copy your fanfiction so relax.), but that doesn't really count as "publishing" 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJTOWER Posted November 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 well, its not really a fan fic, its more of a future story, after halo. it only has three original halo characters even mentioned other than the arbiter. it only mentions lasky, arbiter, jenkins, and chief. all the others are mine. the unsc and covenant stil exist tho. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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