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It's Spartan Augmentations. S-II.

 

Interesting, choice of words was... good. Paragraphs. Decent sizes.

 

Honestly though. MC has Brown hair, and Brown eyes.

 

 

And he liked fighting... wasn't a very talkative, nice or person who smiled a lot.

He became all of those things later. You aren't born that way, you become it.

 

As far as his hair goes, if you've seen

this then you know that those traits can change. (Eye color, maybe hair, he didn't have any)
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I know, this is me trying to give him a more human side, and i know it said he had brown hair when he was abducted (6) but i thought maybe it mighta changed.

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Though his hair hadn't changed, it stayed brown.

 

It showed this in one of those pictures on the Halopedia. He owned 3 ODSTs.

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  • 1 month later...

try doing something else, whenever i'm stuck i play video games, watch anime, draw a pic, or write something else, somewhere down the line i get inspired for the next chapter or something....like today, i was playing Tor, then i got a great idea for a picture for my upcomming fic deendents, and when i finished that i figured out what i was going to to for that one part in 'The hands of fate' where i got stuck. seriously though, hardest and longest chapter i have curently written.

 

 

so just try to do something different. you can't seek insperation, but rather insperation seeks you. you just have to wait lol

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