Ashes: Halo Fanfic

[Doll]

Alright, this isn't my first fanfic, however it is my first halo fanfic. i have already posted it on figment and RoosterTeeth, but i really wanna put it here too. so i hopw you enjoy it, i'll be posting everything that i have for it.

 

 

 

 

"Well would you look at that?" Said a man in sage armor, a SRS99 strapped to his back.

"It's just a dog sir, we should keep moving," another man said, annoyance playing at his words. He was a normal man, one without the heavy armor the first wore.

Then there was a woman, she was old, and tired, tired of this war, tired of the struggle, she reminded me of my mother, a woman who was just tired all the time, but too strong and stubborn to show it. This woman came to me, it had been a while since i interacted with humans, they must find me repulsing. She kneeled down in front of me, and ran her hand across my head. I leaned in, it had been so long since i had felt human touch. I was concentrating so much on this woman's touch that i had forgotten the prize i had beneth my paw, or the blue and purple blood stains around my muzzle. She noticed though, and she didn't mind, in fact. She smiled at me.

"You saved my life, your not just any ordinary dog, to take on the covenant, and rip their arms off," she chuckled, petting the white fur between my shoulder blades. "i'll take you with me." she proclaimed, making it known to everyone that i was coming, and there would be no ands, ifs, or buts aobut it.

I wagged my tail, for what seemed like the first time in ages, i wagged my tail, and i was happy, maybe...maybe all the pain i went through wasn't for nothing. Maybe i can make something out of the ahses of my past.

 

 

The dog in this story is a white Jindo, a Korean dog which is considered a national treasure, or something, anyways, Jindo's are beast, taking down anything that threatens their family and home, known to bring down wild bore, and more during hunts, and they are like ninjas being able to jump and climp roofs and stuff. though i would add that in.

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter 1: The start

 

 

I remember when the war was a feared story my family spoke of many times. A threat I thought i was prepared for , but when it came time...i failed.

 

Their bodies lay motionless on the living room floor of our once peaceful home. Mom, Dad, even the little ones, all of them with blank emotionless eyes. Staring at me accusingly, as i lay next to them. It was my fault they died, I wasn't there when they needed me. I snapped my eyes shut, to surpress the tears i didn't know i was capable of shedding. My head snapped up as a familiar stench drifted past my nose.

 

That stench, the Alien stench of those ******** who killed my family, filled my nostrils. One of them was sitll by the house. I bared my fangs, the white fur on my back stood up as ideas of what i was going to do to this monster ran through my mind. I rounded the corner carefully , and silently, placing one paw in front of the other. Generations of killing instincts ran through my veins, making my blood boil, making me craze for their death. My family, they took it from me, its time i got my revenge.

 

The little beast didn't see me, didn't notice me. He was too focused on the weapon in his grimy little hands. I lunged at the strange creature, closing my maw over his mask, my teeth breaking it with ease. The vile creature tried to escape, but it was useless. By the time it even processed what was going on, I has dragged it down to the cold concreat floor. With my paw i crushed its wrist, the one with the strange weapon. I tightned my jaw around its muzzle, cutting into sinewy flesh. Blue blood sprayed over my white muzzle as i puntured a main vein, it slid down my tongue and throat. I must say, it was delicious. I lifted the monster by its face, and with a swift shake of my head, I snapped its neck. I let go of my prey when i could no longer feel its breath, and with a wicked smile. I left my old home and tracked down the rest of these monsters. I will kill them for what they did to my family, to my home, i will make them pay.

 

chapter 2: ONI Sword base: part one; the meeting.

 

I followed the stench of alien invader until nightfall, taking shelter near the trail until morning came.

When the sun rose, I stepped out from my temporary shelter, shaking myself clean of any dirt, or water, that might have taken a ride on my fur. Satisfied with the sound of my own shaking, I sniffed the ground, trying to pick up the sent. I shouldn't have slept, the trail was getting cold, and i could barely track it.

 

"Stupid rain," I growled as i padded away.

 

It was still raining, washing the sent away. I cursed under my breath as i continued on.

 

"You're new, aren't you?" Someone asked.

 

My fur stood up once again, as i turned around to face the enemy, only to come face to face with a strange dog like creature. Blinking, a little confued. The creature in front of me was about my height, mabe a little shorter, with black fur, yellow eyes and a long switch like tail. As it walked closer to me, i noticed the beast had two extra legs comming from below the ribs. I took a step back.

 

"You act like you have never seen a Wolian female before," she giggled as she circled me.

 

"What do you want?" I asked, "I don't have all day."

 

The Wolian tilted her head, and fixed her yellow eyes on me. "You'll never catch up with them," she said finally.

 

"I'll find them!" I barked.

 

"I see, then go, die like the others," she said with a toothy grin, before she strode off into the thick of the forest.

 

Shaking my head i continued on my search, i had to find the monsters before i lose the trail. On the way i began to think that i was being followed. Maybe it was my imagination, or maybe i was being paranoid, but it did start to feel like i was being followed. I had stopped many times, taking a quick look around me, not being about to catch a sent in the air, or see anything other then the trees and various plants, i reassured myself that it was nothing, but soon it wasn't enought. The feeling of being followed didn't go away, in fact it got worse, and it was making me mad. Turning around abruptly, I lunged at the bush to my side, feeling victorious as my claws came in contact with a warm, living creature, knocking it out of its hiding place.

 

"What do you know, it's the stranger again," it hummed.

 

"Why are you following me?!" I demanded snapping my jaw inches away from her pointed canine face.

 

"Wanted to see if you could find them, and if not..."

 

"I don't need you help!" I snarled, releasing the Wolian from my grasp, then padding my way back to the trail.

 

"I'm coming with you," she barked.

 

I paused, refusing to fae her. "Don't you have a pack to get to?"

She didn't respond for a while, making me believe she was an outcast wanting some companionship. "No, my pack was murdered by the same creatures you are currently hunting now."

 

I turned to face her, staring deeply into the vast yellow pits of her eyes, and I couldn't deny that she was telling the truth. There was that deep scar of pain and loss that coated her yellow eyes, eyes that danced at the thought of vengeance.

 

"Fine," i sighed, and then continued on.

 

"Celestria, that's what i'm called."

Edited December 11, 2011 by Doll
Combined two posts for the member.

[Fire]

Looking good, just make sure to combine all of these, or it's spam.

 

Also where else have you posted this, I have a story too and am looking for places to post it.

[Doll]

Looking good, just make sure to combine all of these, or it's spam.

 

Also where else have you posted this, I have a story too and am looking for places to post it.

 

uh combine?

 

i have posted this in on my Rooster Teeth account, and Figment.com, i plan on posting it on Fanfiction.net once its complete.

[Donut]

uh combine?

 

i have posted this in on my Rooster Teeth account, and Figment.com, i plan on posting it on Fanfiction.net once its complete.

he means keep all the posts in one, Chapter 1 has to be in the same post, Chapter 2, Chapter 3 and so on. Keep em all in the same Box.

[Doll]

he means keep all the posts in one, Chapter 1 has to be in the same post, Chapter 2, Chapter 3 and so on. Keep em all in the same Box.

 

...that seems odd, i have never posted a fic that way...i guess i could do that...

[Sp4rkFloW]

Its really cool how this is from the point of view of someone other than a Spartan or covenant species (which is what I'm used to reading). Its a very interesting turn my "basic" styles of writing. I very much like this story!