Donut Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 --Important Information-- Arch's name is pronounced:: Ark Sev becomes a traitor later in the story. Map for war is finished and ready to be fought upon. Voice acting takes place late Saturday with Lolmenade & Vitamin PWN. Another character comes in (He is a prisoner) and the team will find him in a jail, and invite him into the team! War scenes will be take placed as Teams (Red team = UNSC, Purple & Blue = Covenant) During War Scenes, the main characters go off the battle (because of teams). Hard to explain, we will be shooting in a part of the war, but not in game. The camera will be forced on the main characters so that the camera doesn't see that were shooting at nothing. The actual war will be in teams. We will be in another game "Shooting at the covenant", so it'll look like were actually in the battle. Kinda hard to explain. But you'll get it. We need body actors for war scene people (Covenant and UNSC). _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Vitamin PWN: Captain (Arch) Lolmenade: Traitor (Sev) *Flying to building in Falcon* *Lands falcon* *Sev and Arch get out and walk towards balcony* Arch: So, what's your name again? Sev: Really? Arch: Sorry. I have a lot going on inside my head. Sev: Well it's probably not as much as what's going on in this head. Arch: Why? What happened to you? Sev: I don't want to talk about it. By the way, the name's Sev. Arch: Sev, come on. You flied all the way out here to this city for a reason. Sev: Fine, fine. I, wanted to tell you my story. Ya know. How I got here. My actions from the past. Up until now. Arch. Uh... okay? Is it really all that important? Sev: Yes. It was probably the most important thing I did in my life.... Not to mention... most stupidest... Arch: Stupid? Important? Hmm. Tell me what happened Sev. *Sev turns into Narrator and talks about his story* Sev: *sigh* Well, it was not too long ago. I just got into the ODST business, and I needed to leave the Northern part of, well, Halo. Me and my partner were in this helicopter. The Covenant were on their way, so we HAD to move quickly. He was getting real worried... So I turned on the power and the wings of the Heli started to spin. Rapidly. Oh yeah, Arch. My armor secondary was actually Blue back there. I quickly turned around and saw something... I immediately turned and told my partner that.. the Covenant were already here. As always, he was one step ahead of me. He armed the turret and poured down heavy bullets towards the Covenant. It was barely doing any damage. I got on one. But saw that the Covy were only half a football field away! I disarmed the turret and, hopelessly, went to the back of the Helicopter. Without a sound, I picked up the Jetpack. Yes. Very corny move. Less than 75 feet away from shooting us down, I jumped off the Helicopter. My partner looked very unsatisfied with my decision, he knew no Jetpacks were left. He unarmed the turret and just waited til his ungrateful death. Just then. Nearly 4 seconds later. The explosion happened... I didn't dare to turn around. I just quickly landed on the ground, found a small cave dented in the mountains, called for Evacuation... and just, waited... Hopelessly... waited... *9 seconds later* Arch: I... I don't know what to say Sev... Sev: Well, don't say anything then... *5 second pause* Arch: Sev. Sev: Yes? Sir? Arch: Ready to, meet the team? Sev: Wuh? What team? Arch: We haven't decided on a name yet. Sev: WHAT TEAM??!!? Arch: Want to know the names? Sev: Uh, sure, I guess.... Arch: Okay. 1st off. There's me. The Captain. Arch. Sev: Yeah, I kind of already know you... Arch: Ha. There's Rath. He's our Close Quarters man. He uses Assault Rifle and Shotgun like a pro. He does his orders. No screw ups. He gets the job done. Quick. One of our best men. Sev: Wait a minute, how many members are in this, "Team"? Arch: Five. Sev: Including me? Arch: Yes. Arch: Anyway. Next is Jack. Sev: Jack? So, what does he do? Arch: Well, he's still in training. He's a teen. But is willing to fight. No, he's not as skilled as the others, but he's a fighter. His main weapon is the Assault Rifle, with a side-arm Magnum. Jack loves his Magnum. He is quick, emotional and, well, reliable on occasions... Arch: Last but certainly not least, is Ryan. She is the sniper of the team. She follows orders quickly, but there's a slight problem with her, she, well, lost he voice when she was growing up. Sev: Lost her voice? Arch: Yes. Not because of yelling. Because of a couple bullets to the lungs. She was seriously injured. But, she continued to work. She get's the job done. Ryan just nods when we give her an order. Sev: But, what about communication from long distances? Arch: Sev. Ryan is a skilled soldier. She may be a girl. But she knows how to fight. When she runs out of ammo, she has a spare clip in her pocket. She can do things on her own. Trust me. Sev: Okay. Arch: Would you like to come meet them? In person? Sev: Uh.. sure. Arch: Anything else you would like to talk about Sev? Sev: Actually, yes. You see that big building in front of us? Arch: Yes, called the Hospital. Sev: Got your weapons armed? Arch: Yep. Sev: Let's go inside it. Arch: Sev, why on earth do you want to go in there? Sev: I want some revenge.... Revenge on those Covenant ********. *Arch & Sev get into the Falcon* *Arch and Sev park on the Landing Pad of the Hospital and go inside* -END OF SCENE 1- *Arch and Sev walk out of Hospital* Sev: Boy, that was fun. Arch: Yeah, even though I had to save you from those Ultras like 8 times. Sev: Ha, yeah, sorry about that. Arch: So, you wanna go meet the team now? Sev: Sure, you flyin'? Arch: Yep, the base is on the Island of Northern Halo. Sev: Oh... that brings back memories... Arch: Don't worry Sev, the Covenant are not there, and we built a Graveyard on part of the land, Alaska, after finding a bod- Sev: A what? Arch: *sighs* A body.... He was, your partner... I believe... Sev: Wow. Arch: Sorry Sev, I, I didn't know who he was. I thought he was just a dead ODST who- Sev: He wasn't just an ODST, he was my friend. He was a fighter, What, you don't care for ODSTs?!? Cause you're talkin' to one. Arch: Sev, look, I didn't know. Okay. And no, I care for ODSTs, No, there not worthier than Spartans- Sev: Okay, okay. Not worthier than Spartans?! Have you lost your mind?! Arch: No, I haven't. Sev: Look, let's just go. Get in the damn Falcon and fly. Arch: You're not the boss of- Sev: JUST FLY ALREADY. *Arch & Sev leave New Alexandria and take off* *After 5 hours of flying, the 2 men make it to the base, safely* *Arch & Sev get out of the Falcon* Sev: So... this is the place... Arch: Yep. Were still in Construction, should be finished pretty soon if the Covenant don't attack again. Sev: Alright. So, where's this, "team"? Arch: They're out training in Tempest, our new Training Facility. They will be back soon. Sev: Okay, need help with the base? Arch: No. We have UNSC construction workers, they're over at the front of the base. Sev: Hmm, alright, Covenant? Will they attack us anytime soon? Arch: No, were actually planning an attack on them. They won't even know what hit em'. Sev: Interesting... Well, I'll be off to wait for the team. Arch: Oh no you won't. I need to show you around the place. Then when the team gets back, I'll let you meet them. Arch: Deal? Sev: Wait. Let me see what the Covenant have in store for us. Arch: What? Sev: I'm going on that hill over there, to see what the Covenant are doing. Arch: Okay. But you better hurry, they'll be moving their pack to the Island, to defend. Sev: Alright, you comin'? Arch: Sure. I'll like to see this. *Sev goes up the hill* *Elite Minor sees Sev* *Elite Minor tries to shoot at Sev with Shade Turret but misses terribly* Elite Minor: Damn Plasma. *Sev backs away* Sev: Well, very, unusual about the Covenant. Arch: Yeah... Sev: Anyway, team come back yet? Arch: No. And I think one of the members, Rath, is going to have a problem with you. Sev: Why? Arch: He very much dislikes ODSTs. Sev: *sigh* Why's that? Arch: He thinks ODST's are not better than Spartans, which I think is true, but- Sev: Jesus, okay. Spartans are in fact, not better than us you, ass. You wanna know what I've been through??! Arch: You know what, I already know what you've been through. Sev: Then let me prove to you that i'm more than just a soldier. *Sev smacks Arch* Arch: What the hell Sev?! *Arch hits him back* Sev: AAHHHH!!!!!!! *Sev hits Arch even harder* *Arch hits him back* *Sev walks away* *Arch runs toward Sev* *Sev throws down Drop Shield* Sev: Didn't know I had Armor Abilities huh?!? *Sev hits Arch even more harder* *Hits eachother* *Sev runs away trying to get his shields up* Arch: Can't outrun a Spartan son... *Arch grabs Sev and knifes him in the ribs* *Sev holds in the pain and stands back up, and goes after Arch* *Drop shield by Sev again* *Arch shoots it down* *Sev drops another one* *Sev jumps out and attacks Arch* *Sev leaps as high as he could* *Jumps over Arch* *Lands behind him* *Smacks Arch as hard as he could in the back* Sev: Ha! How's that for some ODST power?!? Arch: Oh, my. Back. How did.... you....Heal so... damn quickly? Sev: I'm an ODST. I've been to hell & back. I'm used to it. Arch: Ugh, I see. Good job beating me. Sev: You wanted a fight. And you got one. Arch: So, you wanna see the rest of the place now? Sev: Sure. I'll hop in the gunner. -END OF SCENE 2- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lolmenade Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 I GET TO BE SEV?! Beast script Donut! EDIT _________________________________________________________ Why is the girl's name Ryan o.0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donut Posted January 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 I GET TO BE SEV?! Beast script Donut! EDIT _________________________________________________________ Why is the girl's name Ryan o.0 .... Ryan is a boy/girl name. I can change it though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Patrick- Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 I could be one of the Elites in the building, and I have a couple of brothers who could guest to make it easier. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lolmenade Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 .... Ryan is a boy/girl name. I can change it though. Ohh, I did not know this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John-117 Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 AWESOME, I want IN!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vitamin Pwn Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 Sweet im a Captain lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vitamin Pwn Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 about what time Saturday are we gonna do the voice acting? because i have a funeral i have to go to early in the afternoon. i'll be back later in the day though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donut Posted January 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 about what time Saturday are we gonna do the voice acting? because i have a funeral i have to go to early in the afternoon. i'll be back later in the day though Probably at night. 8 pm Eastern maybe? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vitamin Pwn Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 that will be about 5pm for me cause im in PST. i will mostly likely be home by then Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azaxx Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 i would like to be in, depends on you and when i can get on the xbox Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
its LilBeast Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 Excellent script, so far is there going to be elites with a specific well known role? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donut Posted January 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 Excellent script, so far is there going to be elites with a specific well known role? Actually, yes. I have Audacity & can change my voice to sound like an elite. It's the Zealot. Other elites (In war) will be Rangers & Minors. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
its LilBeast Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 Alright sounds good donut. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaveAtStateFarm Posted January 27, 2012 Report Share Posted January 27, 2012 Bad-ass. I....am..crying...So....Eff-ing...good....DAMN IT! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaveAtStateFarm Posted January 27, 2012 Report Share Posted January 27, 2012 Can't wait for the team! It's goin' to be like Noble team,Where even though Emile wasn't the best,or the leader,people thought he was a Bad-ass Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ash Posted January 27, 2012 Report Share Posted January 27, 2012 Very impressive I look forward to the rest of the script Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lolmenade Posted January 27, 2012 Report Share Posted January 27, 2012 Amazing :') Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vitamin Pwn Posted January 27, 2012 Report Share Posted January 27, 2012 i like it, good job donut Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MCPO Mayh3m Posted January 28, 2012 Report Share Posted January 28, 2012 This is impressive, I read this just earlier and enjoyed it. Can I be a fill in character sometime? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donut Posted January 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2012 This is impressive, I read this just earlier and enjoyed it. Can I be a fill in character sometime? yes. We have 6 main Characters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. DJ Posted March 11, 2012 Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 I'll be in the war scene Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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